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recurrence in campfuckuvote

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Jun 11, 2007 13:23

Last batch!

Remember!
- Applicants, respond anonymously.
- If you're going to do the whole "ask me if I voted you out!" thing, please state who you voted out.
- No speculating about the identity of the applicants!

Now VOTE. Closed!

( ... yes, this is really the last batch. )

Comments 41

overacting June 11 2007, 20:39:53 UTC

INS: Beetle, Link

OUT: Kamui and Catherine

Abstaining on Matt.

withoutwiings June 11 2007, 20:42:31 UTC

Link, Jaime, and Matt in; Kamui and Catherine out!

Ask for concrit if you want. ♥

mcjunyi June 11 2007, 20:45:14 UTC

OKAY SO.

Jaime - In

Matt - Abstain due to beta, but I'm nudgeable~

Kamui, Out

Catherine, Out

Link, In

I... probably will be kind of le suck at concrit so I WOULD NOT RECOMMEND IT.

superbeastly June 11 2007, 20:53:26 UTC

Jaime Reyes ... Your canon tells me I want to know more. The jump from the first paragraph to the second really threw me and I've had to reread a bit XD; The jokes fell a bit flat to me as well. Out

Matt OH HO NEW DEATH NOTE CHARACTER TO BADTOUCH. I... have no idea who you are. Clearly I shouldn't've stopped reading the manga OH WELL. This is very much like licking a bumpy lollipop. Sweet, but a bit hard for me to enjoy because it's so bumpy. Out.

Kamui Your voice seems... off. I can't ever recall Kamui sounding so... dynamic? Maybe that's not the right word, but the app feels more like a running gag than it does Kamui+funny, and it should really be more of the second. It's like X the fighting game (WHICH I DID DOWNLOAD AND PLAY THANK YOU VERY MUCH) which ... is kind of polygonal and not very satisfying. I-if you want to reapp hit me for beta? If.june at gmail! Out

Catherine Dollanganger ... oh my I know these books. Well, never read them, but shelved them. The app feels pretty scattered and, well, a bit short. Out
( ... )

superbeastly June 11 2007, 22:11:35 UTC

Link apper here, didn't send you an app for beta so no worries. ;)

superbeastly June 12 2007, 16:15:32 UTC

AWESOME and you're awesome and stuff ♥

im_impulse June 11 2007, 20:55:16 UTC

Jamie, we're married. Thought you needed to know that.

im_impulse June 11 2007, 21:17:36 UTC

Okay, Jamie and Link were Ins! I can do concrit if asked I think.

Matty apper im_impulse June 12 2007, 08:39:30 UTC

Crit would be wonderful. :D Thanks!

Re: Matty apper arse_nick June 12 2007, 08:54:45 UTC

Okay, you had a lot of potential, I did find some lines really snicker worthy and there was a sense of strong purpose in your app. For example, the running trends of the video game was good but so much of your app skipped around. Mentioning mosquitoes to House of the Dead, to Donkey Kong, back to House of the Dead. It made your app seem longer than necessary. I think this is one of the few times where an app had too much. The quality in it was good! But for someone who's an apprentice world's greatest detective (I haven't read DN so I can't comment on anything beyond what your canon says) he seems a little less than analytical? Not in the apathy way, although that part came through, just in the format. Likewise the name dropping of Mello just felt sort of tacked on. I know Mello is important to him so mentioning him would be okay but when he does it feels like there isn't much of a purpose and drive for this person he spends most of his canon appearances with, which conflicts ( ... )