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NEXT ROUND! And another dup at the end.

Remember!
- Applicants, respond anonymously.
- If you're going to do the whole "ask me if I voted you out!" thing, please state who you voted out.
- No speculating about the identity of the applicants!

Now VOTE. Closed!

Comments

[notforrappig]

RINOA ♥ um right voting now

[veryshocking]

IN for Rinoa, Mana, and Roxy. OUT for everyone else. I dunno, I'm picky today.

[lastle_cord]

Mana IN, everyone else OUT, ask for concrit if you want.

Rinoa's apper

[anonsmouse]

I'm extremely sorry for the use of an account, but Liverjournal rejects anon comments from my dorms proxy.

Could I ask for crit, if you're not too busy? Thank you!

Re: Rinoa's apper

[death_backpack]

Hey, you got a reason and it's in keeping with the rules, s'all good!

The 'LJ outage' joke grated on me a bit, because it's getting a bit too meta for me. Sure, we've had similar jokes worked into apps before, but they're usually connected to a character's quirk in some way. Rinoa's voice also seemed a bit too ridiculously perky/naive to me, but I discounted that because a) it matched the canon and b) I don't remember the game that well, anyway.

I think the main issue with the app was getting in some more original humor? I don't know. It seemed like most of the rest of it was focused on comparing Squal to the zombies, and...yeah. I fail at crit tonight.

Re: Rinoa's apper

[lastle_cord]

*Squall, that is.

Actually, I keep reading and rereading your app and going 'hmm,' so if you're borderline a little later on, I'll switch my vote.

[blue_bombshell]

Laharl #2 in as well as a wibbley Rinoa. All else out.

[blue_bombshell]

Oh, Roxy is also IN. Ooops. XD

[athrowned]

Rinoa in, the rest abstain due to lack of canon knowledge. Though, if you're on the edge, give me a poke and I'll give it a read-over.

Roxy apper.

[athrowned]

I know asking for votes can be a dangerous thing on abstains, so I'll just ask for a read through and any concrit you can offer. Is that okay?

[just_wes]

Wow, I'm here in time to vote for once! And .. sorry, but only Freefall, Mana and Laharl #1 were in, the rest out. Feel free to ask why, but I might answer tomorrow because it's already quite late here.

Rinoa Apper

[just_wes]

Hi, could I please ask for concrit?

Thanks!

Vyvyan apper

[just_wes]

Any advice?