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[recurrence]

... o right. I can take a break from Phoenix Wright anthropology to post apps. Worst multi-tasking ever, I swear.

Remember!
- Applicants, respond anonymously.
- If you're going to do the whole "ask me if I voted you out!" thing, please state who you voted out.
- No speculating about the identity of the applicants!

Now VOTE. Closed!

Comments

[marezydoats]

...OMGWTF KYOU

[marezydoats]

Seimei was my only in. Ask if you want to know.

Alfons apper~~

[marezydoats]

Be gentle, plz

Re: Alfons apper~~

[marezydoats]

First of all, congratulations on making the FMA movie actually sound interesting! That's a feat in and of itself. I felt that the canon section could have used a little trimming- as a general rule, I think that the sample post should be longer than the canon. But that's neither here nor there. The problem I had was while the voice was a consistent one, there wasn't anything that made the app itself stand out to me- I understand that humour is a bitch to pull off, but even with leaving that aside, nothing really drew me. If that makes any sense at all.

Still, mad props to you for even apping him, and I would love to see you re-app. (Also, if things go up for you and your app is boderline, poke me and I'll give it a re-read, see if I don't change my mind, because believe it or not, that out was a wibbled one.)

[scoreswithballs]

... All I want to say right now is MEIN KAMPFY CHAIR and then return to voting. I cannot explain BUT I CAN BLAME ALFONS.

[shinnanigans]

... your struggle chair?

[scoreswithballs]

...Maybe it's only funny if you see it, I dunno.

[shinnanigans]

Okay, yeah, that's good.

[lastle_cord]

...THIS IS THE BEST APP ROUND EVER

Votes!

[lastle_cord]

Kyo, Alfons, Yamamoto OUT. Light a very wobbly IN. Seimei IN. Riku, ABSTAIN. Ask for concrit and EVERYBODY WHO DOESN'T MAKE IT REAPP PLZ.

Alfons here

[lastle_cord]

Seeking concrit!

Re: Alfons here

[lastle_cord]

You've probably been told this already, but the canon could use some trimming! Just a general overview of the FMA movie's plot would have been fine.

With the app itself...I didn't really get a strong sense of the character, possibly because Alfons was just sort of reacting instead of acting, and most of the punch lines came from the laptop. So the whole app just really fell flat for me.

[durandork]

Holy buttcheeks.

[hascoldhands]

Sanzo's ass is up to vote?

[head_playboy]

I would OOC give him an IN!

[evil_groupie]

Same here. 100%.

[missingdream]

KYOU-KUN. LIGHT. WEIRD DOPPLEGANGER. I. JUST. OMGWTF UNF I LOVE YOU ALL lemme go read stuff now omgomg ♥♥♥♥♥♥

Some votes!

[missingdream]

Riku - Out Eeeh, it just felt bland to me. Touched on the basics of camp (zombies, gorillas) but didn't do anything original with them. And the squirrels singing about Axel's hips read more like an in joke than anything. Both of those things can be done and be done well, I think, but you just didn't quite manage it.

Kyou - Out ;; Sweetie why you gotta hurt me. First off, the caps were much too much. There are ways to get across anger other than constant caps. And there's a lot more to Kyou than his short temper and hate on for Yuki. You mention in the canon that he has trouble expressing anger and then don't mention the personality beyond the anger -- and there is one! He's thoughtful and sweet, even if he's completely retarded about it and messes up a lot. He is capable of affection. He worries about Tohru. He has things he's afraid of. You didn't even mention why he wants to beat Yuki, which I think is pretty important. He is capable of getting along with people. And I didn't see any of that in the app. There is much more to Kyou

Re: Some votes!

[twincestlol]

. . . I meant trouble expression things besides anger, yeah. I can type okay.

Re: Some votes!

[twincestlol]

IGNORE MY CONTINUING TYPOS D: