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[recurrence]

Last batch! Apologies for the delay, heh. The next open app date will be announced soon. If there are any issues with applications (i.e. it wasn't posted, or ... I don't know), please e-mail us with who you apped. mello at kodou.com gets to me relatively quickly. We'll get back to you ASAP

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[classprotector]

In for Fighter and Fuu, others out, ask if you want.

Zorn and Thorn

[classprotector]

Plz to know how we can improve?

Re: Zorn and Thorn

[classprotector]

In what feels like about the weirdest crit I've ever had to give, it wasn't repetitive enough. So much of Zorn and Thorn's regular dialogue is defined by the rephrasing--from what I remember of them, they mostly rephrase each other and very rarely really talk with each other. This felt much, much more like a conversation than anything I can remember them doing in the game. Also, most of their rephrasings in this didn't really read like their rephrasings in the game. In the app, it reads much more like they're using the repetition for emphasis instead of it just being a weird speech quirk. Basically, this didn't seem like the kind of back and forth interaction they had in the game because they didn't seem as in-synch, I guess. And, yeah, like others, I was very surprised to see them as camper-aged, though it wasn't a major motivating factor.

Re: Zorn and Thorn

[classprotector]

Hmm, good points. I'll have to be more careful with their voices, make sure they talk more like a single unit than just two repetitive people. Also, replaying the game.

The age thing... uuugh, I'm going to have to look for stuff on that. Because while I'm weird and always saw them as pretty young, I guess they could be a lot older than I thought. But then, based on what they are, they might actually be younger than they look. So, research goes here.

Thank you so much for the crit!

Youji apper

[classprotector]

Crit, please? :)

Re: Youji apper

[classprotector]

There just wasn't enough to the app for me. There's too much complaining, not enough funny, and overall not enough content. It's short but doesn't pack in enough good stuff that the length works for it. It's all very "I'm bored," and very little of anything else. If you need to reapp, I'd try to put more of something else in the app, since as it is it comes off as less amusing and more whiny. Hope that helps!

Re: Youji apper

[classprotector]

It does, thank you so much!