(Untitled)

Jun 19, 2006 19:24

OKAY, sorry for not closing and getting a post up earlier this afternoon. I had a minor disagreement with the kitchen sink and it regurgitated all over the floor and I had to clean away the ROTTEN MOLDY TURKEY BROTH AND SEWAGE SMELL. My dogs - who are perfectly intelligent and didn't take the opportunity to roll around on the floor or anything - ( Read more... )

Leave a comment

innocence_boots June 20 2006, 00:56:50 UTC
KANDAAAAAAAAAAAAA

Reply

veryshocking June 20 2006, 01:12:49 UTC
Oooooookay. In for Kazuki. Out for Soma, Watanuki, and Shino. Abstain on Kanda because of beta. What happened to your formatting, dear? D: Also Abstain on Panthera, because I don't know you canon at all.

Ask if you want to know more!

Reply

Soma apper innocence_boots June 20 2006, 02:02:44 UTC
Advice please?

Reply

Re: Soma apper veryshocking June 20 2006, 02:24:25 UTC
I haven't played any of the Castlevania games with Soma in it, so, uh, I'm not gonna comment on your voice--you could be wildly off or the most amazing ON every, and I'd never know.

What I voted on was your creativity and your humor. Now, humor's subjective, but it didn't even look like you tried to make it funny. It's hard to get serious characters to be funny, but with a little work, it can be done. What really made me vote out was the fact that it was so bland. He arrives at camp, is unimpressed, and doesn't do anything. I don't get an impression of how he'd react to anything there. Throw something at him! We've got great wildlife and natural hazards--how is he going to deal with them?

Reply

Re: Soma apper innocence_boots June 20 2006, 02:44:09 UTC
I did try my best for humor, though it seems to have fallen flat. *sigh* I know I can work on the rest of it, though. And thank you for your advice!

Reply

innocence_boots June 20 2006, 02:10:58 UTC
Panthera here-- my app's formatting went weird, too, which has never happened to me.

Reply

veryshocking June 20 2006, 02:18:46 UTC
Did you send it as a .txt file? Gmail has the tendancy to eat formatting, from what I hear.

Reply

innocence_boots June 20 2006, 02:41:36 UTC
I sent it the same way I've sent at least one previous app-- pasted in the body of the email. Never had this problem before.

Reply

macintech June 20 2006, 03:02:57 UTC
Did you take off word wrap? I almost always write my apps in notepad and have noticed if you take off word wrap then it formats properly. :\

Reply

innocence_boots June 20 2006, 20:54:56 UTC
Kanda here.
Formatting, I don't know. ;___;

Reply


Leave a comment

Up