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[rinkhals]

KYAA KYAA BABY'S FIRST BATCH. The chances of me screwing this up = high. Love me anyway.

Apps are still open until 6 AM EST, of course, whiiiich is about another eight hours, so keep on sendin' them in! Tiny round is tiny! How can they make me slave away without more apps!Remember

Comments

[pussyfortono]

Everyone in except the Durarara app.

[pussyfortono]

Hello! Mikado apper here, looking for crit?

[pussyfortono]

It was too scattered for me to make sense of.

[pussyfortono]

O-okay. The whole thing? I'm sorry about that, he is very wide-eyed in a new place. I will try to make it more coherent if I need to re-app.

[pussyfortono]

Yeah, I just couldn't get a handle on it. It jumps around too much. I mean, the sample portrays the canon section well, I'll give you that. But it's also very disjointed. It was hard to make sense of it. I ended up having to reread it several times to try & catch what he was talking about.