Okay, I'm more coherent now. I actually abstained on all the canons I didn't know, which is everyone except Harry and Brock, who both got Ins from me. MEANWHILE:
HAAAAARRRRRRRY. GET IN HERE NOW. You are all kinds of awesome. Loony loves you ♥
Nosedive Apperdeath_backpackDecember 28 2005, 00:18:23 UTC
Er, what did I do wrong? Canon too big? Maybe I should've mentioned that I wrote the canon big so that I wouldn't have to explain my entire canon a second time.
Or was I just too "out there" with my App? I think I might've made it a bit... too unique?
Re: Nosedive Apperdeath_backpackDecember 28 2005, 00:25:47 UTC
Canon much, much too big. A general idea of the show and character in about a fifth of the words you used (or less?) would have been ideal XD; The sample entry could have used a little trimming too.
I still read through everything, though, and...yeah, nothing in the app stood out to me or gave me a laugh, and it tended to ramble on a lot. Sorry!
Re: Nosedive Apperdeath_backpackDecember 28 2005, 00:39:38 UTC
I'm just not exactly sure how I *can* explain even a small part of the show in about a fifth of the space, but I suppose I can try. ... And the sample entry *was* trimmed. By a lot. I had cut out a half-dozen or more paragraphs out of it when I editted the thing.
I'm horrible with the rambling, because that's exactly how I think. I don't think like everyone else. Sounds like I really need to find myself beta readers.
Most of the humor probably got cut when I editted the thing and cut out the paragraphs I did. >.> At the time, it seemed funnier. Oh well, seems like I'll be reapping.
Okay Concrit wutmaster_of_monDecember 28 2005, 00:40:20 UTC
Marius- In. All in all, nothing really grab me in the app but the last paragraph won me. Yaaay artistic types!
Martina- In. It had a nice voice to me from what I remember (it's been years since I've watched Slayers, woe)...and I fail at any other crit.
Nosedive- Out. Ah. I think the others have explained basically all I wanted to say |D
Brock- *NOT BIASED LOVE, RLY* In duh, but just in case you don't get in ah.....damn I have no useful concrit. I FAIL D: ♥ Oh, but question! "Slate" is fanon name isn't it? NOT THAT IT MATTERS, just wondering |D
Harry- ...hi, I don't know Harry Potter canon. Voting based on what I've learned from CFUD and the AU, you seem pretty solid. SHOUTA CAPSLOCK RAGE IS GO ♥ In.
brock appermaster_of_monDecember 28 2005, 09:46:03 UTC
^___^ Thanks.
Re: Slate as fanon - Actually I thought of that right -after- I sent in the application. *master of bad timing* I remember 'debates' over last names back when I lurked on the Pokemopolis boards, and had always favored Slate/Waterflower (vs. Harrison/Williams) for the crappy pun aspect. However, a quick (actually, a very slow since I got distracted) Google search turns up more reputable sources for Harrison (IMDB and tv.com). Still, neither Pokemon nor 4kids' official sites list a last name...ug. I'll have to start checking episodes (think they're in Mom's basement somewhere >.>)
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And Harry?
You are WTFAWESOME.
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HAAAAARRRRRRRY. GET IN HERE NOW. You are all kinds of awesome. Loony loves you ♥
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Ins: Martina, Harry
Feel free to ask. Harry, I love you and we are married, just so you know ♥
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Or was I just too "out there" with my App? I think I might've made it a bit... too unique?
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I still read through everything, though, and...yeah, nothing in the app stood out to me or gave me a laugh, and it tended to ramble on a lot. Sorry!
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I'm horrible with the rambling, because that's exactly how I think. I don't think like everyone else. Sounds like I really need to find myself beta readers.
Most of the humor probably got cut when I editted the thing and cut out the paragraphs I did. >.> At the time, it seemed funnier. Oh well, seems like I'll be reapping.
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zomg you sound so much better than my Brock D: (BIG WORDS YAY) ;o; ♥
Now to vote on the rest |D
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Martina- In. It had a nice voice to me from what I remember (it's been years since I've watched Slayers, woe)...and I fail at any other crit.
Nosedive- Out. Ah. I think the others have explained basically all I wanted to say |D
Brock- *NOT BIASED LOVE, RLY* In duh, but just in case you don't get in ah.....damn I have no useful concrit. I FAIL D: ♥ Oh, but question! "Slate" is fanon name isn't it? NOT THAT IT MATTERS, just wondering |D
Harry- ...hi, I don't know Harry Potter canon. Voting based on what I've learned from CFUD and the AU, you seem pretty solid. SHOUTA CAPSLOCK RAGE IS GO ♥ In.
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Re: Slate as fanon - Actually I thought of that right -after- I sent in the application. *master of bad timing* I remember 'debates' over last names back when I lurked on the Pokemopolis boards, and had always favored Slate/Waterflower (vs. Harrison/Williams) for the crappy pun aspect. However, a quick (actually, a very slow since I got distracted) Google search turns up more reputable sources for Harrison (IMDB and tv.com). Still, neither Pokemon nor 4kids' official sites list a last name...ug. I'll have to start checking episodes (think they're in Mom's basement somewhere >.>)
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And hopefully you'll be getting in. IF YOU NEED ICONS I'M YOUR WHORE D: ♥
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