Horio, Chase and BJ, in. Ryoma, I'm abstaining right now, and everyone else out.
Horio - your app was... a little jumpy. It didn't read that well to me, but, then and again, Horio is a bit of a spaz himself, and the whole two years of tennis experience thing... just. ♥ ♥ Come to camp so Mizuki can manipulate you and take over the world with you, Horio-zilla? ♥
Ryoma - I think you've got the bored and kinda bratty voice down really well, but... the app itself was a bit... I'm not sure. It wasn't very engaging? Will think about it a bit more and then vote, though I'm leaning towards an "in" right now.
Everyone else, feel free to ask for why I voted the way I did etc.
Re: Caboose apper_nfu_December 28 2005, 00:19:54 UTC
I think, overall, your app was quite cute and it does show the naive and somewhat thick side of him quite well, as you said in your canon (since I'm not familiar with it), but it was a little disjointed. *is a sucker for apps that flow properly* You also make a lot of references to other characters in canon, especially in the first paragraph, and that kinda... flew over my head a little. Throughout the whole thing, you make references to only 2 things about camp - zombies and the director, and the rest is almost totally canon references, so maybe next time, try to tone that down a litte? I think overall there was nothing really wrong with your app, so to speak, it just wasn't particularly engaging either. Add a little more humour, more about the camp itself, and good luck if you wish to reapp. Hope that was helpful... brain working on very little sleep right now. x_X;;
BJ, Chase, Horio, in. Horio, I was a little borderline on you at first, but the inclusion of the two years tennis experience line just. I. ohgod. How could I not vote you in?
Ryoma, abstain. I like the voice, but ... mhh, there's something I can't quite place my finger on about your app. I'm leaning towards in at the moment, but I want to hold off for now.
I salute all of you people whose canons I haven't the faintest clue of but make me squee so much love for you regardless. <3 mr. BJ my mind can't stop the dirty jokes wryyy
...and I am a wibbly voter. Everyone in except Harpuia; your app was the only one in the bunch that just wasn't all that funny. It had a lot of canon refs, and explained a lot about where you come from, but wasn't...funny. More humor next time?
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Okay. Going to vote now. XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
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Horio - your app was... a little jumpy. It didn't read that well to me, but, then and again, Horio is a bit of a spaz himself, and the whole two years of tennis experience thing... just. ♥ ♥ Come to camp so Mizuki can manipulate you and take over the world with you, Horio-zilla? ♥
Ryoma - I think you've got the bored and kinda bratty voice down really well, but... the app itself was a bit... I'm not sure. It wasn't very engaging? Will think about it a bit more and then vote, though I'm leaning towards an "in" right now.
Everyone else, feel free to ask for why I voted the way I did etc.
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OH MY FUCKING GOD
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Let's steal Gert's boyfriend, Ari.
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Chase. Take me now. Everyone needs a little shouta in their life.
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Dude. Love triangles are so gay.
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Ryoma, abstain. I like the voice, but ... mhh, there's something I can't quite place my finger on about your app. I'm leaning towards in at the moment, but I want to hold off for now.
Caboose, Harpuia, out.
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...and I am a wibbly voter. Everyone in except Harpuia; your app was the only one in the bunch that just wasn't all that funny. It had a lot of canon refs, and explained a lot about where you come from, but wasn't...funny. More humor next time?
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