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[theboxization]

Next round, everybody keep voting ♥ The last round is STILL OPEN so vote on that first, I'm just putting the next up quicker so I can close before my flight tomorrow~ I need to pack

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Comments

[ningen_demonai]

LOKI ♥

[climaxinside]

sakuraaaaa \o\

[sistercomplex]

Ins for Merlin and Loki. Abstain on Sakura since she seems more violent than I'm used to but hey I've been out of Naruto fandom for a while now.

[sistercomplex]

Hello, if you're okay with it, this Natsu apper would like to ask about crit. If you'd rather not, I understand.

[sistercomplex]

There is a bit too much going on so it's hard to follow. It's also hard to showcase the character's voice when there's so much focus on moving him from one situation to the next. Sections need to be fleshed out more so voice can match with the flow of the app. I understand from canon this character is a bit manic and chatty so maybe lots of sentences at once might help. As is, it's choppy.

[sistercomplex]

I wonder if I just wrote it wrong, then. He isn't really that chatty, exuberant, yes! But he's not the type to talk at length. I thought him literally visit many places around camp would be too much, which is what he would probably do, but did try to use the tour guide to give that effect without the actual movement.

If I need to reapp, I'll try something else, I think. Thank you for the crit.

[healingcock]

All in! Am easy like mac-n-cheese.

[alexander]

MERLIN

~ IN

~ abstain on the fairy tail apps

~ OUT for everyone else

[eternalsamba]

I'll take a look at the abstained apps if you want o/ just give me a poke.

Atoli apper

[alexander]

If it's okay to ask, I wouldn't mind concrit?