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[recurrence]

NEXT ROUND I will close this before I go to work tomorrow morning, I swear. But I may not get to mail notifications until after it, so. Heads up! Only I can't do that if there aren't enough votes, guys!

Remember!
- Applicants, respond anonymously.
- If you're going to do the whole "ask me if I voted you out!" thing, please state who you voted

Comments

[bellsofsteel]

I JUST GOT PINGED LIKE EIGHT TIMES SO

FUCK YEAH KAMEN RIDER

brb will vote innasec

[perennially]

TSURUGI-KUNNNNNNNNN ♥

[byakuran]

In for Kamishiro, Riful & Raiha. Abstain on rest because IDK their canons.

[bicycloptic]

LUCY/NYUU *__*

Voting in just a bit!

[bicycloptic]

In on Linda and Lucy/Nyuu. Abstain on Estelle. I will look at the others later. Nudge me if you need a vote.

[anoathkept]

My only in was Estelle with an abstain on Raiha for bias.

Riful apper

[anoathkept]

May I ask for crit?

Re: Riful apper

[anoathkept]

I could definitely see the character there (for being ... canon-blind, that is), but a lot of the wording was clunky and difficult to follow. The flow into the "hee hee" line also put me off a little, as it seemed a little awkwardly constructed. I felt like you could've done a little more with the character than you did in the app, but again, this is me being canon-blind.

I hope that helps! Having reread it a couple times, I am wibbling, so I might change. ♥

Re: Riful apper

[anoathkept]

Thank you very much for the advice! I can definitely see what you mean and what I'd try to do differently. ♥