This is simplified from the one I used a few years ago, but IMHO, not simplified enough. I reordered things to follow the critique format I use for other people, so hopefully it will follow my brain's habitual pattern. After I get the first few crits on Fakes & Familiars I can tailor it to the flaws I'm exploiting on this particular rough draft. ( Read more... )

Spent at least three hours this morning revising Pooka, and it felt like 15 minutes. I've still got quite a bit of revision left though if I want to take advantage of an open critique spot in my "big" critique group. I feel like passing on an open critique spot is like passing on chocolate-raspberry cheesecake. Just not done unless you're sick.

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1. break into chapters ( Read more... )