With a Kiss, He Falls

[witty_teacup]

Author: witty_teacup
Title: With a Kiss, He Falls
Rating: PG-13
Pairing/s: Merlin/Arthur
Character/s: Merlin, Arthur
Summary: "I would give you everything, and you'd only have to ask.”
Warnings: None
Word Count: 2255 (hahahahahaha)
Prompt: #78 - The Month of Sins: Lust
Author's Notes: Let's play, "Did-You-Even-Try-To-Keep-Under-1000-Words?" The answer is no

Comments

[witty_teacup]

YES, INDEED IT IS. I TOLD YOU I HAD THIS ALL PLANNED OUT. I didn't actually have to fuss with it too much, it came out just the way I wanted it and it makes me really happy okay. *pats you on the back*

omg I'm going to have so much fun doing the Seven Sins with this verse. It's probably going to take a lot of thinking this week though because I've basically only planned, after this one, Greed & Wrath, and everything else is just like, nonexistent in my mind. But I'm definitely getting ridiculously excited over this, I haven't had this much fun writing in forever.

The whole 'You're mine' thing was an after thought right before I posted if you can believe that. But I dunno, I suddenly had this urge where I like, /needed/ to write possessive!Merlin because when it all boils down, he really does care about Arthur and isn't just going to let him waltz out of his life--not without fighting for him first.

Eeee I'm really glad you like it because tO BE HONEST I was kind of freaked about posting this, like I was so pumped about it at first but then I HAD THIS HORRIBLE STRING OF THOUGHTS LIKE WHAT IF EVERYONE HATES IT WHAT IF EVERYONE IS DISAPPOINTED and yeah. But thank you so much I'm really glad you like it <333

I did have to do the mention, thank you very much, I probably wouldn't have continued this series until like decades from its first part if you hadn't expressed interest in it. So *hugs* thank YOU. For everything. Yes.

//and i'm sorry for ranting oh god I got carried away

[osky291]

Well I'm glad you're having fun, I'd be ashamed if I was nagging you to write something you did not really want to write.

And how can people hate this? Look at all the lovely comments - I hope that goes some way in curing you of the ridiculous self-doubting!

LOL I think we're past the "sorry for ranting" stage by now :D Rant away! Anything that helps you better to keep these coming!! I'm super excited to see what you have planned for Wrath!

And you know what I just realized? There are seven sins but only 4 weeks in "the month of sins" :O :O Why couldn't October be a 7-week month?!!!

And stop saying thank you - this is getting ridiculous! It's like, I pestered you to make me a sandwich and you did and you're thanking me for eating it on top of that!!!

[witty_teacup]

Well, lucky for you, I'm enjoying this verse very much.

I know, I know! I just get all ridiculous sometimes because I get so apprehensive about my work--it's like I don't THINK it's bad, but what if it is, you know? But everyone is being so nice and it's really motivating me and asdfghjkl; IT'S REALLY NICE OKAY. LIKE YOU GUYS ARE THE SWEETEST PEOPLE EVER.

Okay, okay! Sorry sometimes I just feel like I get a little too carried away. I've spent the better part of my nights sort of filling in the plot holes that I have for each of the sins--and I'm hoping to introduce some other Angel/Demon characters into the mix. Wrath includes such characters, if all goes well :)

You know, funny thing, I was telling my sister about the month of sins, and she said the same thing! I'm actually really glad October isn't a 7-week month, though, 4-weeks is lone enough for me pffft.

Oh gosh though, I don't know how well I'm going to be able to keep up with the drabbles come November--I'm doing NaNoWriMo this year, and I'm not allowed to back out of it because my friend, who actually writes on here too ( rottencreampuff ) yelled at me and told me that because I talked her into doing it that I have to do it with her. But it might be fun to write another book, at least.

And no, I'm not going to stop thanking you, thank you very much--OF COURSE I WOULD THANK YOU FOR EATING THE SANDWICH BECAUSE OBVIOUSLY IT WAS GOOD ENOUGH TO EAT. But this is getting redundant at the very least, so let's just shake hands and call it even, yeah?

[osky291]

*shakes your hand* I like this plan!