Fic: Not Quite Number One

Jul 30, 2013 23:05

Author: osky291
Title: Not quite Number One
Rating: G
Pairing/s: Canon
Character/s: Leon, mostly
Summary: Leon has always been number two.
Warnings: None.
Word Count: 395
Prompt: Rival
Author's Notes: Not what I wanted to write, but what I wanted to write needed research I did not have the time for. So.

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pt 068:rival, rating:g, type:drabble, c:leon, *c:osky291

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brunettepet July 30 2013, 18:28:03 UTC
It took long years and the tragic death of his friend and King to get Leon back to his coveted position. I hope he's happy there.

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osky291 July 31 2013, 01:10:11 UTC
Yeah he did have his position in the end, but I dont think he wanted it quite that way. Thanks for reading!

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eurydice72 July 30 2013, 18:49:39 UTC
Aw, poor Leon. :( Thanks for sharing!

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osky291 July 31 2013, 01:11:41 UTC
Its been a struggle, hasn't it.. Thank you for reading!

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archaeologist_d July 30 2013, 19:07:54 UTC
Loved how poor Leon was always #2 - or lower. The ending was great.

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osky291 July 31 2013, 01:12:49 UTC
Oh! I had doubts about the ending.. I'm glad you liked it :)

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47eleven July 31 2013, 02:28:54 UTC
Enjoyed this :)

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osky291 July 31 2013, 03:21:21 UTC
Aw look, its vlavla! Glad you enjoyed :)

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witty_teacup July 31 2013, 05:28:38 UTC
I always did love Leon, and this was really well done! It's very simple in words but yet it has a lot of meaning to it, and I like being able to see through Leon's eyes and how he felt like he was second best. I'm glad he got to be the best, but I'm also sad that it took the loss of the King to get there. Either way, brilliant job on this <3

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osky291 July 31 2013, 08:04:47 UTC
Thank you very much! I loved writing Sir Leon's POV in this :) Also, this might be the longest comment I've ever received! Yay!

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witty_teacup August 1 2013, 19:26:18 UTC
You're welcome! Ha ha, I get pretty wordy sometimes, but I'm happy to have been the longest comment, somehow.

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osky291 August 3 2013, 14:50:21 UTC
So am I, thanks again :)

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