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Is anyone willing to read an essay of mine and offer constructive criticism? I am writing a personal essay for a summer program that I desperately want to get into. The competition is tight (only 64 out of 1,000 applicants get in), so I want my essays to be as good as possible.
This time, I want people who are willing to absolutely tear my essay apart in pursuit of making it better.
Message me with your emails, please, if you'd like to take a look. I would ask my teachers to read it, but I am worried that it is too intensely personal -- so for this, strangers who barely know me would definitely be best. :D
Thanks so much.
This time, I want people who are willing to absolutely tear my essay apart in pursuit of making it better.
Message me with your emails, please, if you'd like to take a look. I would ask my teachers to read it, but I am worried that it is too intensely personal -- so for this, strangers who barely know me would definitely be best. :D
Thanks so much.