This just gets better and better! I loved the scene between Chloe and Oliver! This is how the show should be. The tension was palpable, but with more under the surface there from Oliver. I'm going to enjoy watching him "Fall" for her hard, and I can see it already. Just wonderful! The pace is great, realistic, you are building tension perfectly. A.C.'s comments were great too, and liked the shopping scene. Great writing!
I liked the bit with AC too. It was cute. Everybody usually uses Bart for that 'fun' League interation with Chloe. But I don't know, I could see AC being kind of fun too, just not as goofy. Yea, Oliver has the tension thing going on. I really didn't intend to write that scene so tense. I knew it waas going to be hard to write Oliver out of this. But I think in the next chapter we'll see a little bit of an improvement.
Yeah, I agree. I think A.C. could be fun too. This is really going well. I love all of your stories, but I think this one is turning out to be my favorite. Can't wait to see what happens next! :)
Oops! I guess I better edit that and head over the ff.net to fix it too. I'm really glad that the AC/Chloe scene went over well. It's always good when people appreciate the scenes that aren't necessarily Oliver/Chloe focused.
Great update Calie, the chlollie scene oozed with tension, fabulous!and I agree with gen, Ollie is going to fall hard! what happened a year ago? I'm intrigued. AC thinking Ollie was a woman, classic.
Oh the year ago thing. That was just Doomsday. I guess I didn't clarify it well enough. I was just trying to give people an idea of how long it had been. Yea, when Oliver does finally reveal his feelings it is going to be pretty desperate.
Of course I have to comment :) I really enjoy the discomfort and awkwardness between Ollie and Chlo. How he tried to deny she means a lot to him. Also love the AC/Chloe interaction.
I think the awkwardness is going to start getting worked out. Of course then it will just turn into a new kind of awakwardness ;) You know I didn't think everyone would like the Chloe/AC interaction, I kind of just added it as an after thought. I should have the next chapter posted today. I've gotten most of fit written. Really good Chlollie scene.
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Thank you for the update. The tension between Chloe and Oliver was great and the shopping scene was cute. LOL. I need more Aquaman in my life ^-^
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I'm really glad that the AC/Chloe scene went over well. It's always good when people appreciate the scenes that aren't necessarily Oliver/Chloe focused.
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Like gen I really enjoyed the restaurant scene with Chloe and Ollie, how much bigger is that elephant in the room gonna get?? LOL!
Great job!!!!!!!
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I really enjoy the discomfort and awkwardness between Ollie and Chlo. How he tried to deny she means a lot to him.
Also love the AC/Chloe interaction.
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You know I didn't think everyone would like the Chloe/AC interaction, I kind of just added it as an after thought.
I should have the next chapter posted today. I've gotten most of fit written. Really good Chlollie scene.
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