This just gets better and better! I loved the scene between Chloe and Oliver! This is how the show should be. The tension was palpable, but with more under the surface there from Oliver. I'm going to enjoy watching him "Fall" for her hard, and I can see it already. Just wonderful! The pace is great, realistic, you are building tension perfectly. A.C.'s comments were great too, and liked the shopping scene. Great writing!
I liked the bit with AC too. It was cute. Everybody usually uses Bart for that 'fun' League interation with Chloe. But I don't know, I could see AC being kind of fun too, just not as goofy. Yea, Oliver has the tension thing going on. I really didn't intend to write that scene so tense. I knew it waas going to be hard to write Oliver out of this. But I think in the next chapter we'll see a little bit of an improvement.
Yeah, I agree. I think A.C. could be fun too. This is really going well. I love all of your stories, but I think this one is turning out to be my favorite. Can't wait to see what happens next! :)
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