Iron Poet, Round XII.

[cadhla]

Welcome to the latest round of Iron Poet, the game where you give me three words and I give you a poem. This is an adaptation of a standard writer's workshop activity, and I do not claim the original concept. I just claim to enjoy doing it

Comments

[thnidu]

Oooh, first! "Candy", "vinegar", and "hair", please.

[weezerscaddy]

Hehehe...vinegar and hair made me smile. That is awesome.

Caution.

[cadhla]

Vinegar rinses can make the hair blonder,
Flaxen as candy, spun-sugar and air;
Frequent dismissals can make the heart fonder,
Never complain, dear, that love isn't fair.

Vinegar kisses can make resolve flounder,
Take it a'tumble in haystack or field.
If consequences should make your girl rounder,
Don't you complain, dear, that you chose to yield.

Re: Caution.

[thnidu]

Oh, goodie!!!! Thank you!! :-)

Re: Caution.

[cadhla]

Very welcome!