Comments | bysine: #44: storm children

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#44: storm children

Sep 18, 2010 01:55

Title: Storm Children
Fandom: Arashi
Word Count: 6,500
Summary: Urban fantasy AU. Magic is scarce in this city. It can be found rising from trodden clusters of cigarette butts, or in the gleam of a cat’s eyes in the darkness. Some days Nino has to scrape it off the soles of his mismatched boots, where it’s been caught with the mud and dirt found in ( Read more... )

fandom: arashi, .writing, au: storm children, fic: arashi, rating: g

Comments 53

calerine September 17 2010, 18:09:43 UTC

HANNAH IS AWESOME, YES SHE IS! \o/

__sine September 17 2010, 18:37:35 UTC

TYVM, BB. ♥

lianne29 September 17 2010, 19:22:15 UTC

i like how the words flow and give vivid images and i find the pictures that accompanied the text to be apt.

i'm intrigued with the rules of this world and the possibilities.

^_^

__sine October 30 2010, 16:15:57 UTC

Late reply is late!

Thank you for reading this - I'm glad the pictures were apt and that this world intrigued you! ♥

sunnydreams416 September 17 2010, 19:36:40 UTC

I am in love with the way you write. ^^

__sine October 30 2010, 16:16:11 UTC

You are too kind. Thank you for reading! ♥

aegistheia September 17 2010, 20:13:42 UTC

adfkj I really like this kind of format that you use to post the more involved of your AUs. The photos are sparse but packs so much into the scene, and it's just admittedly fun to click and flip through pages. I am all for that extra dimension of immersion! Thumbs up on your efforts! And it's really great when inspiration comes from the strangest places; they're often the most fun to write, for me at least.

Hooo boy, let me list a few of the things I really, really like in your story. I like that Aiba can fly and communicate with crows, and never reveals the true background of his powers or heritage. I like that Nino has his own loyalties and uses cards for something more than just card tricks: in this universe he actually makes them disappear with secrets for good - that's a lovely subversion! I like that Sho is the same stubborn, has-his-own-morals Sho that we know in life, and that he has a gun when no one else uses it anymore, the same way he had the half-broken mechanical arm in Electric Sheep. I like that Ohno likes ( ... )

__sine October 30 2010, 16:25:13 UTC

HI, THANK YOU for such a lovely comment! (And sorry my reply is so late ( ... )

cherry1989 September 17 2010, 20:48:08 UTC

I LOVE this! The mysterious plot and the pictures!!! <3 Awesome! You´re really good! <3

__sine October 30 2010, 16:25:26 UTC

Thank you for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it. ♥