omg, so. Of all the pre-series how-they-got-together-to-be-hilarious-superhero-boyfriends fic I've read (which is a lot), this must be my favorite. It has grammatically incorrect texts, Billy being neurotic over and over, and Teddy being incredibly awesome while still being a TEENAGER. Which you know, because you wrote it and everything, but seriously, it's awesome. And I never comment on fanfic because I'm not really in this fandom or anything, but I'm at that one-drink-enough point tonight, so I thought I would say that this is great, and thank you for posting it. SO ANYWAY, this made me happy, A+.
Atti, this is amazing, I love how you show just how different all the boys are, I love how they all feel real, how they all have their own ways of seeing the world and how they all have faults.
Eli playing chess and lecturing Nate about Harry Potter! SECRET LIBRARIAN AND MY SECRET FAVOURITE. Billy the caffeine addict worrying about his own motivations! Teddy, learning to let himself be himself (I love how you worked in the origin of his piercings). And Nate, holding all the information but still completely unsure of everything, trying so hard to get it.
You write so well! I don't think you get told this enough but your prose and your grasp of how a story flows is FANTASTIC.
What what Eli should never be anyone's secret favorite, that is something to shout LOUD AND PROUD! But also i am so happy you liked all the boys in this yay!
;asldkrua;ih you are making me blush stop that. ♥ ♥ ♥
Well, secret because Billy is probably my actual favourite because of how much I can identify with him, but Eli keeps surprising me with how amazing he is and how much I love him.
NO NEVER I WILL COMPLIMENT YOU UNTIL YOUR HEAD FALLS OFF ♥
Eli is a sardonic dork who is also a librarian, WHAT IS NOT TO LOVE? ♥ And now that I have planted the image in my own head I kind of want to seem an AU of him as an actual kindergarten teacher, but that would be HILARIOUS. Actually it probably wouldn't even have to be an AU?
YOU ARE FANTASTIC, ATTI, SERIOUSLY. I love this story very, very much. Your Billy is just ugh I love how he is prickly and grumpy but still an immensely loveable dork. I love how I can see Children's Crusade Billy in him but at the same time he feels so young here. And Teddy! Teddy! What a brilliant take on him! He hurts my heart here so, which just makes the ending better because I'm so glad of where he got to. Teddy is fascinating in this story. And I gotta say again that though Eli is more of a support character here, you write AMAZING ELI. Amazing. Do this more!!!
So yes, THIS FIC. THIS FIC IS SO GOOD. AND THEY ARE SUCH A CUTE LITTLE BB TEAM. AND I AM JUST ENDLESSLY HAPPY THAT THIS IS IN MY LIFE NOW.
Rikoooooooooooooooooooo what would I do without you? &hearts ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ I AM NEVER GOING TO STOP SAYING THANK YOU OMG
ngl i have like 60% of the teddy side of this plotted out in my head um and i kind of wish i had had a way to get more of it through but TALKING ABOUT FEELINGS HOW DOES THAT WORK
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Atti, this is amazing, I love how you show just how different all the boys are, I love how they all feel real, how they all have their own ways of seeing the world and how they all have faults.
Eli playing chess and lecturing Nate about Harry Potter! SECRET LIBRARIAN AND MY SECRET FAVOURITE. Billy the caffeine addict worrying about his own motivations! Teddy, learning to let himself be himself (I love how you worked in the origin of his piercings). And Nate, holding all the information but still completely unsure of everything, trying so hard to get it.
You write so well! I don't think you get told this enough but your prose and your grasp of how a story flows is FANTASTIC.
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;asldkrua;ih you are making me blush stop that. ♥ ♥ ♥
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NO NEVER I WILL COMPLIMENT YOU UNTIL YOUR HEAD FALLS OFF ♥
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BUT I NEED MY HEAD :(
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So yes, THIS FIC. THIS FIC IS SO GOOD. AND THEY ARE SUCH A CUTE LITTLE BB TEAM. AND I AM JUST ENDLESSLY HAPPY THAT THIS IS IN MY LIFE NOW.
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ngl i have like 60% of the teddy side of this plotted out in my head um and i kind of wish i had had a way to get more of it through but TALKING ABOUT FEELINGS HOW DOES THAT WORK
Team!fic forever okay. Forever.
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