Atti, this is amazing, I love how you show just how different all the boys are, I love how they all feel real, how they all have their own ways of seeing the world and how they all have faults.
Eli playing chess and lecturing Nate about Harry Potter! SECRET LIBRARIAN AND MY SECRET FAVOURITE. Billy the caffeine addict worrying about his own motivations! Teddy, learning to let himself be himself (I love how you worked in the origin of his piercings). And Nate, holding all the information but still completely unsure of everything, trying so hard to get it.
You write so well! I don't think you get told this enough but your prose and your grasp of how a story flows is FANTASTIC.
What what Eli should never be anyone's secret favorite, that is something to shout LOUD AND PROUD! But also i am so happy you liked all the boys in this yay!
;asldkrua;ih you are making me blush stop that. ♥ ♥ ♥
Well, secret because Billy is probably my actual favourite because of how much I can identify with him, but Eli keeps surprising me with how amazing he is and how much I love him.
NO NEVER I WILL COMPLIMENT YOU UNTIL YOUR HEAD FALLS OFF ♥
Eli is a sardonic dork who is also a librarian, WHAT IS NOT TO LOVE? ♥ And now that I have planted the image in my own head I kind of want to seem an AU of him as an actual kindergarten teacher, but that would be HILARIOUS. Actually it probably wouldn't even have to be an AU?
it wouldn't strictly need to be AU, just futurefic: Eli teaches kindergarten when he's not superheroing it up! Kate could be some high-flyin' businesslady/philanthropist (I bet she could run for President and win, the OVERACHIEVER), Cassie a scientist like her dad maybe? I can't think of what Teddy or Billy would be doing exactly. And I can see Tommy eventually opening his own small business out of sheer stubborn independence. And Vision is.... Vision. He does his own thing.
GOSH FINE TELL THEN I'LL COMPLIMENT YOU TILL JUST BEFORE IT FALLS OFF alternately are there any bits of you you don't need or is this all getting just too gross
Actually, now I think about it, I can totally see Eli as the disgruntled high school history teacher. All rolled up shirt sleeves and really ridiculous ties and sitting in the teacher's lounge reading 4 different newspapers before class and grunting at people when they try to interrupt him.
Also I can see Kate as either president or the first chair cello in the New York Philharmonic. The philanthropy thing goes without saying. :)
Atti, this is amazing, I love how you show just how different all the boys are, I love how they all feel real, how they all have their own ways of seeing the world and how they all have faults.
Eli playing chess and lecturing Nate about Harry Potter! SECRET LIBRARIAN AND MY SECRET FAVOURITE. Billy the caffeine addict worrying about his own motivations! Teddy, learning to let himself be himself (I love how you worked in the origin of his piercings). And Nate, holding all the information but still completely unsure of everything, trying so hard to get it.
You write so well! I don't think you get told this enough but your prose and your grasp of how a story flows is FANTASTIC.
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;asldkrua;ih you are making me blush stop that. ♥ ♥ ♥
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NO NEVER I WILL COMPLIMENT YOU UNTIL YOUR HEAD FALLS OFF ♥
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BUT I NEED MY HEAD :(
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GOSH FINE TELL THEN I'LL COMPLIMENT YOU TILL JUST BEFORE IT FALLS OFF alternately are there any bits of you you don't need or is this all getting just too gross
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Also I can see Kate as either president or the first chair cello in the New York Philharmonic. The philanthropy thing goes without saying. :)
Mmmmm, I suppose I don't need my pinkie toes.
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