MUSE ☆ PRAISE ☆ AND ☆ CRITIQUE: AUGUST 2011

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[soulsfriday]

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☆MUSES: soulsfriday

☑ general praise OK
☑ character crit OK
☑ writing crit OK

( Just for character crit, I would rather it by people who are familiar with the real. But if you have something to say about her character no matter what, go ahead. )

[soulsfriday]

I know literally jack about her real (which is weird because I know a lot about jpop wtf), but I find Chiaki adorable. She's cute and fun and super nice. The fact that she's so welcoming to everyone at r_y makes me really like her.

I can't critic, as I don't know the real well. But she seems awesome to me.

[soulsfriday]

Haha ♥ Thank you very much! It makes me happy to hear that. We'll do our best to keep commenting because I like getting to know different muses.

[ningenshinri]

(( I don't know the first thing about her, but I'd just like to second the fact that she's very welcoming. She and Kyo haven't spoken much, but it's been entertaining when they have. She seems very easy to talk to, which is nice to see. I hope they have the chance to interact more in the future. ))

[soulsfriday]

Thank you! I hope they'll interact more too, as I said before 笑 I really like when they speak as well.

OOC

[loveotaku]

They don't really converse that much but she's really adorable and A~chan appreciates whenever they comment. I can honestly say that while I'm familiar with AAA and their music I have no idea about the personalities within the group save Misako's. So I will not touch on character crit for now. XD!

Still I hope they get more opportunities to chat since they have a few things here and there in common.

Re: OOC

[soulsfriday]

Thank you for the nice words ♥ I hope they will chat more often too! I'll try to leave comments more often.

Ooc.

[sippinsizzurp]

Zino adores Chiaki. She's his rock, noona, chichi. I don't know much about the real in general, but from what I've seen in the videos Chiaki has sent him, your muse is quite sassy just like the real. I love that she tells Zino exactly what she thinks without sugarcoating it whatsoever. He needs someone that is utterly blunt with him or else he'd never understand or he'd constantly be worrying about dumb things. I love their random conversations. It's always fun to see what they'll talk about next because sometimes it feels like they end up talking about things completely unrelated to the original topic. I love that she teases him all the time. Zino does as well but I think that's mostly because he's such a masochist

Re: Ooc.

[soulsfriday]

♥ ♥ ♥ Thank you! I'm going to reply to you in detail when I catch you later but just wanted to say that about her stopping it's mostly my fault getting distracted and she's not pulling away from Zino at all. I'll try to pay more attention to it next time. I think it might be because Zino's always there and he feels more like family so she doesn't feel like she needs to keep talking to him and other people she still is trying to get to know them. But I'll be more careful! (It's also that sometimes she doesn't know what's going on in his life because he's not updating much or talking about it as often.)

anyway I gotta sleep now. I'll reply to you tomorrow!

[soulsfriday]

While I lack the fact that she's been around for a while and has developed a well-rounded, solid personality, this muse-- and I'll be first to admit to knowing nothing about the real-- comes off as arrogant and conceited, frequently looking down on others for not knowing Japanese culture (for example, the Koreans she comes in contact with). Whether this is because she is egotistical or just overly nationalistic is unclear, but her... there's no other word for it, zeal turned me off from her.

[soulsfriday]

*like

[soulsfriday]

I apologize I have not realized that she came off like that. I'll try to tone it down because that is not my intention at all. We never thought Koreans (or muns) should know Japanese culture, and if we were talking about it then it's probably to make a conversation and I'm using the wrong wording. ( If it's happening with the Japanese muses, then it's just a way to share information. I don't mean any harm. )

Thanks for the heads up!

About the arrogant and conceited, it's an opinion. Just like how people have different opinions about a person, muses can be considered like that too. She has those times and times when she's meek. Ofcourse I'm not trying to show off all her sides in comments or first contacts so that is fine.

Thank you for the honest critique. I appreciate it.

[soulsfriday]

I'm sorry if this does not fall under what you are asking for as crit, but it is something I have noticed. Your muse tends to post what looks like direct translated copies of her real's blog. I have noticed some different things lately, which is nice, but the posts just from her blog are hard to reply to. It would be nice to see some thoughts from Chiaki the muse posted as opposed to thoughts from Chiaki the real.

[soulsfriday]

Not really, I only use her blog when I like a photograph she posts, but otherwise it's always my muse and what she's into recently. Although I'm flattered that it comes off as the reals blog but that's not what I'm doing at all.