MUSE ☆ PRAISE ☆ AND ☆ CRITIQUE: AUGUST 2011

[bubblybliss]

Welcome!

RULES:

☆ Please adhere by the coding associated with each muse(s). If a mun specifies that they only want praise, that does not mean you get to critique them anyway. If we see any kind of abuse, the comments will be deleted. Likewise, if a mun DOES NOT specify what kind of feedback they'd like, their comment will be deleted to avoid

Comments

[soulsfriday]

rakuen-yodan
☆MUSES: soulsfriday

☑ general praise OK
☑ character crit OK
☑ writing crit OK

( Just for character crit, I would rather it by people who are familiar with the real. But if you have something to say about her character no matter what, go ahead. )

[soulsfriday]

I know literally jack about her real (which is weird because I know a lot about jpop wtf), but I find Chiaki adorable. She's cute and fun and super nice. The fact that she's so welcoming to everyone at r_y makes me really like her.

I can't critic, as I don't know the real well. But she seems awesome to me.

[soulsfriday]

Haha ♥ Thank you very much! It makes me happy to hear that. We'll do our best to keep commenting because I like getting to know different muses.

[ningenshinri]

(( I don't know the first thing about her, but I'd just like to second the fact that she's very welcoming. She and Kyo haven't spoken much, but it's been entertaining when they have. She seems very easy to talk to, which is nice to see. I hope they have the chance to interact more in the future. ))

[yeors]

SARANGBOX
☆MUSES: geniusprone

SIDEQUEST
☆MUSES: sungyeor

☑ general praise OK

☑ character crit OK

☑ writing crit OK

☑ unlisted muses OK

If it pleases you. :3

[yeors]

L is such a sweet person and from his journal post we can see how he can be thoughtful, there are so much more of him that you have got to figure out

[geniusprone]

Thank you, anon. And it may just be too early in the morning to process anything properly, but the last part is a little confusing...do you mind clarifying?

[byungari]

sideqwest
☆MUSES: kyaoh

sarangbox
☆MUSES: limitlessdream

☑ general praise OK

☑ character crit OK

☑ unlisted muses OK

I'd really prefer critique, but have at it. ♡

[yeors]

I'll separate my comments ... for both. This one is for our dear Byunghun. No- wait- I need to mention how much fun it has been playing with you in general, although we hardly do enough together

[ssul]

rakuen-yodan
☆MUSES: glitterkick

☑ general praise OK
☑ character crit OK
☑ writing crit OK

[lyrical]

I don't know very much about the real Jinri... but I'll go with the rest of this :3

[starburst]

I can't say anything about the writing part since we haven't scened yet, sadly, but all in all I think that your muse is very lovely. She opened up to Sohyun fast and it's so much fun having them talk! :]

We hope you stick with us!

[ssul]

I don't know your muses' real but I wanted to give you a ♥ for all of the fun that I've had watching our muses talk. We wait a long time between new muses who show up and foil a different part of my muse. So basically this is just a selfish thank you to your muse for having such a fun and cutely outgoing personality! We haven't probed much past surface level yet but there is the appearance of depth to her so I'm excited for that to happen. If my muse will cooperate!

[bukeo]

sideqwest
☆MUSES: bukeo
sarangbox
☆MUSES: starcollection

☑ general praise OK
☑ character crit OK
☑ writing crit OK

We're (very) slowly bouncing back from a hiatus and getting back into the swing of things. Any critique is much appreciated. ★

[geniusprone]

So I have a bit to say on Niel. And your writing. A little