MUSE ☆ PRAISE ☆ AND ☆ CRITIQUE: AUGUST 2014

[bubblybliss]

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[bubblybliss]

** SAMPLE **

cloudapp
☆MUSES: bubblybliss / bubblybliss

homeless / psl
☆MUSES: bubblybliss

OK ☑ GENERAL PRAISE
OK ☑ CHARACTER CRIT
OK ☑ WRITING CRIT (ANY)
OK ☑ UNLISTED MUSES

[aings]

REBELBASE
☆MUSES: charmful @ dw

OK ☑ GENERAL PRAISE
OK ☑ CHARACTER CRIT
OK ☑ WRITING CRIT (ANY)

[[ I've had her floating around on LJ for a while as a homeless muse, and finally stuck her in a home this past month. Any concrit from either experiences would be greatly appreciated! She's never interacted with as many people as she has this past month compared to before, so we'd love to hear how people feel about her. Thanks!

[itamitower]

Alright, let's do this

[aings]

Hi! Thanks for taking the time to leave feedback (especially since you're on hiatus!), I really appreciate it. I do remember that Lizzy was a bit reserved when they first talked-- I think we were still getting the feel of having her talk to new people-- but I'm really glad that you can see that she's improved! A lot of it had to do with the intimidation of playing a social muse, but I think I was also worried that Lizzy would be overwhelming to people... but then I kind of accepted that it's completely in her nature to overwhelm people every now and then, and I think that helped loosen her up. And I agree with the point about them opening up to each other so quickly, because I had a bit of the same worry, especially with other situations that she's been dealing with. I think pacing is something that Lizzy needs to learn when it comes to interacting with people... and honestly, that's what I've really enjoyed when it comes to her interactions with Jonghyun. Since interacting with him, she's had to deal with some faults that I haven't

[itamitower]

This is how I'm enjoying my vacation/babysitting ~_~ Haha I just love to write.
And nope! You're not the only one. I enjoy the flaws and there were days where Jonghyun wasn't his usually calm and bubbly character yet she played along, I just think that's endearing.

[910403]

homeless
☆MUSES: 910403
OK ☑ GENERAL PRAISE
OK ☑ CHARACTER CRIT
OK ☑ WRITING CRIT (ANY)

( she's still pretty new and doesn't have many friends, but we'd love any feedback possible!

[910403]

i haven't had to chance to interact with your hyemi directly but from seeing her around and how she interacts with people, i have to say (as a longtime fan of 9muses) that she seems pretty spot-on. she has the perfect balance of being playful and friendly without being too overbearing. we hope to see more of her around. ^^

[910403]

thank you, anon! i've actually been worried about whether she comes off as too restrained, so this is really reassuring. ;; whoever you play, i hope hyemi interacts with your muse(s) in the future! :)

[vibrantdecay]

victoria peak
☆MUSES: vibrantdecay / renascendi

OK ☑ GENERAL PRAISE
OK ☑ CHARACTER CRIT
OK ☑ WRITING CRIT (ANY)
OK ☑ UNLISTED MUSES

[kyunnii]

I haven't had a chance to play with either of your muses yet, but I may or may not have stalked a few of your threads >.> Your Cade is fascinating to watch, and I like how you don't wander off-character with him (which is harder with some character types than others, so kudos to your writing skills). I find vampire characters especially hard to get right, given what they are and the glorified way today's media views them.

Can't wait to get a chance to bump into him IC ^^

[sooyoung]

homeless / psl
☆MUSES: sooyoung

OK ☑ GENERAL PRAISE
OK ☑ CHARACTER CRIT

[playful]

So let me preface this by saying I've seen your Sooyoung muse around before and given that she always seems to be on top of her game every time, I was no less than terrified when I was realized that our mutual Soojung was introducing Jinri to her. (A kind of excited terrified though.) This Jinri in particular has been through/was going through a lot when she began talking to your muse, so I was also worried that she'd come off dull, uninterested. But it was quickly clear that I didn't have to be concerned because Sooyoung easily led Jinri into this mode of genuine, albeit quieter, excitement all the time and their conversations had me laughing more often than not

[sooyoung]

i really don't even know where to start replying to this because it means so much to me :( i don't want to gush so i'm going to keep this short, but it's so gratifying to know that you have the same perception of their friendship because from the start it's felt very natural and genuine and i've really enjoyed the way they play against each other. thank you ❤

[sooyoung]

Hi, dear. I hope you have been doing well ♥

I just want to start off by saying how amazing Sooyoung is not only because your portrayal of her is accurate, but because she is always there to talk things out when things went wrong with my Jessica. I do apologize that our interactions were rather cut short because I've been really losing my voice on her, but I really did appreciate how Sooyoung always stuck by and listened to whatever rambles & complaints she had. I am honestly not sure if I'll ever be back fully on livejournal to pick up where I have left off with her, but I do hope that we can keep in touch and run into each other sometimes !

Best of luck! :)