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brokenhands

FIC: you were summer [and then you left]

Jun 23, 2010 15:36

Title: you were summer [and then you left]
Author: cayskank
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Kris/Adam
Word Count: 835
Disclaimer: Do not own, not real. No disrespect intended. Banner; collapsinnight
Summary: Funny how the boy behind the counter steals your breath when you've got what might be the perfect girl right beside you. It's not something to freak out about, not really, ( Read more... )

the break-up fic, fic: you were summer, pairing: kris/adam

Comments 27

untiltimeends June 23 2010, 21:48:20 UTC

Whaaaaaat???? Where did this come from? This is amazing. Really. God. I mean. Just. Ugh. See? You left me speechless. You should continue writing Kradam forever and ever and ever.

brokenhands June 23 2010, 22:02:28 UTC

This is the fic I've been complaining about for so long it's got it's got two tags! It's not even that long. God.

For some reason I get realllly hung up on Kradam. Remember SMF? Yeahhh, still on that painful hiatus.

But, thank you <3 I'll use your comment as inspiration whenever Kris and Adam are kicking me in the ass :) ♥

untiltimeends June 23 2010, 22:52:18 UTC

Oh, yes. I do remember that now. :D I'm really happy you actually wrote it. Are you going to write more?

SMF! You seriously need to finish that, woman!

Good Adam and Kris should never kick anyone in the ass. XD

brokenhands June 23 2010, 23:36:20 UTC

I'm glad to finally be finished with it. And, maybe. I'm not sure. I'd like to, though, and if I do, I'd like to write in third person and make it a longfic. Somewhere near or over 10K. If I ever get motivated for a such a feat, that is XD

I know! Ahhh someone messaged me about it recently and I was like OH NO SMF. SO NEGLECTED D: I was having trouble getting from part three to the ending. I hate that. I always write the ending first, then start the beginning, and get stuck once I get to the middle. Frustrating.

Well, clearly they like to pick on me XD I'll try to keep them in line from now on

wikken June 23 2010, 23:17:53 UTC

brokenhands June 23 2010, 23:37:24 UTC

Thank you <3 I'm glad you enjoyed it. I may write another piece to this sometime :)

wikken June 24 2010, 00:01:49 UTC

sweetlady1985 June 23 2010, 23:29:47 UTC

Wow! this is really good! You should write more of this!

brokenhands June 23 2010, 23:39:22 UTC

Thanks bb! ♥ I might write more eventually :)

nzfan June 24 2010, 01:22:00 UTC

Awesome fic and I love your title. A sequel would be kinda brilliant too ;-)

brokenhands June 24 2010, 03:40:54 UTC

Thank you! (Haha oh GOOD. Titles (after dialogue) are the bane of my existence. I'm not good with them. So I'm glad to hear you like it :D) And we'll see what I can do about one of those sequel things ;)

yumipitz June 24 2010, 03:13:57 UTC

This is amazing. Your style of writing is like watching a short silent film and the actions are the dialogue. Wonderful bb, wonderful.

brokenhands June 24 2010, 03:42:36 UTC

Oh, thank you for this wonderful comment ♥ I'm glad you liked it :)