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brin_bailey

Sunshine Never Gets In Here (Dean/Jo) PG

Sep 18, 2007 16:21

Title: Sunshine Never Gets In Here
Author: Brinny
Characters: Dean/Jo
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 300
Spoilers/Warnings: None.
Notes: Little bit of a triple drabble written for joans23 and inspired a wee bit by "Give Up & Go Away" by Stripper's Union, which also provides the title.

( The room is entirely too bright, florescent tubes bleaching out everything they touch. )

pairing: dean/jo, character: dean winchester, fan fiction, fandom: supernatural, character: jo harvelle

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brin_bailey September 18 2007, 23:40:07 UTC

Hmm, it is very possible that I used Tennessee because I know that you live there. It's also very possible that I googled Tennessee to find a specific city/town, because I have terrible knowledge of American geography. But, I'll never say. ;)

As for the other stuff? Heh, I started typing out this long ass explanation, that I might as well turn into a fic of it's own, but we'll see.

misskatieleigh September 18 2007, 23:10:48 UTC

you're leaving us hanging here! *coughmorecough*

brin_bailey September 18 2007, 23:41:51 UTC

Hee. I usually don't write do anything that even resembles a cliffhanger, I feel all mean.

Now that theladyscribe's post got me thinking, I might have some sort of plan for this all.

quiet_rebel September 19 2007, 00:13:39 UTC

I loved those details in the hospital from the lights to the hospital gown. I loved that image of Jo helping Dean dress.

Yes, this was much too short, but I hope you plan on continuing!

brin_bailey September 19 2007, 02:48:20 UTC

Thanks!

The whole thing with the lights is very close to a lyric in the song that heavily inspired it. (I think it goes, "Florescent tubes bleach out this room/And sunshine never gets in here".)

If the idea that I have pans out, I just might have to continue it. In which case, I'm blaming all of you. :P Hehe.

december21st September 19 2007, 03:03:28 UTC

So, I have a slightly different take.

Don't continue it. It's perfect just the way it is. I really like that you don't explain everything, that it's just a snapshot taken out of context.

brin_bailey September 19 2007, 13:13:37 UTC

The whole taken out of context snapshot is definitely what it was intended to be when I wrote it.

If the idea that I have (which I'm thinking would actually be similar in style, kind of disjointed and just there) pans out we'll see. Otherwise, I kinda don't want to taint this one, heh.

joans23 September 19 2007, 05:28:15 UTC

Wow, wow, wow, I love it!! I also want to jump on the bandwagon and chant moremoremore, but for now I'll be satisfied and just say thank you sooo much, it was a lovely bribe :)

brin_bailey September 19 2007, 13:14:20 UTC

Hee. Well, again, thank you so much for your help! I am glad you liked this, though. :)