Little Man, Adebisi/Wangler, NC17

[breakingparole]

Title: Little Man
Beta:  ozsaur - my hero and shit
Pairing: Simon Adebisi/Kenny Wangler
Rating: NC17
Warnings: Non-con
Spoilers: Through Season Three, Episode Six: Cruel And Unusual Punishments
Summary: Kenny struggles with the sexual aspect of being Adebisi's prag. Confused by Adebisi's ability to provide pleasure as well as pain, he

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[slashy_4]

Hey it's the little sicko again *s*
Oh got to love shower scenes, hot....but my god, poor little Kenny....he he he but in some way you making me laugh as I feel so sorry for the little fucker. Damn you, that takes a very good writer to do so.
can't tell you enough how bad-ass your Adebisi is, he is so scary *hides under bed*
As usual great job ;)

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[dustandroses]

Hey...glad you found it. I have to admit, when I saw this particular request, I thought it was yours. So I thought I'd just make it part of that arc, and fit it into the Prag stories. (That way I could write my Oz_Magi story, and still write you another Kenny and Adebisi fic at the same time.) I was very surprised when I realized it wasn't you who had requested it!

I also wondered why you hadn't guessed that I was the one who had written this fic. I guess that would be because you hadn't read it, yet, right? *g* I almost pointed it out to you, but I decided to wait until the writer's reveal, and see if you found it on your own.

Yeah, I know - Adebisi is a scary dude. He makes me nervous just watching him on the tv.

Poor Kenny...it's really hard to write about this time in his life and not bash him around a bit. But as they often say about Beecher..."he just hurts so pretty..." *g*

I'm glad you liked it. *g*

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[slashy_4]

=)
as always thank you, and to tell you the truth, it was silly me. I know it was fucking stupid move to make, but I felt like what the hell, hope you don't wishing me dead right now or something, I feel stupid as it is *smiles a bit*
And I knew it was you, recognized the style (that I adore)

Yes Adebisi scares the shit out of you just by smirking...he looks...hmm I don't know so evil.

Yes I bet it's hard but you're really doing a wonderful job with Kenny, as somebody else wrote as a comment to you earlier "It's like tom fontana on more crack" *g*

The fact that you actually worked with the fact that Kenny is so much smaller than Adebisi just cracks me up...the title is so perfect...

so anyway, sorry again.

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[dustandroses]

I was actually writing a reply to bustyo's comment when you deleted it! That was weird -

But I'm glad you told me it was you before I finished the entry, because it was going to include an account of how I ended up writing this pairing in the first place. And this way I didn't need to write all that out - 'cause you already know it. *g* You surprised me when you deleted your comment - but I deleted my reply , so it looks less weird.

I should have thought something was up, since it didn't look like bustyo used their journal much, you know?

Well, I'm glad you recognized my style...I was surprised that both Titti and Adrianna read the fic, but didn't recognize me, since they both tend to read all my fic. And I'm the one who actually introduced Titti to Oz, through my stories.

hope you don't wishing me dead right now or something, I feel stupid as it is *smiles a bit*Don't worry about it. What's done is done. I'm glad you liked the fic. I was writing it for you, after all. *g* First I thought I was writing it for you,

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[slashy_4]

Oh your such a doll, I've actually felt bad about it, but like you said what's done is done, and it turned out well in the end right =)
But god, the way you came up with this story just out of that line "gansta lovin in shower" that amazes me....YOU ROCK DAMN IT :p
And so does that icon you have at the moment....Bah....*hides under bed again* ;)

I'm writing stuff of my own but I seem to get Dusty-complex, don't ask me where that came from *big smile*
I just can't write it like you do (that's the point there should only be ONE that can write like they do right)
and it's probably since it's ME writing it that I'm very critical
*I'm pretty confusing right now to I bet*
But hopefully you know what I mean.
Mehehe

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[dustandroses]

It's really difficult to try and write differently than you already do. If you're just learning how, you can probably train yourself to change some things - that's why it's called the learning process. And no one is too old to learn. The one thing that helped me the most was finding a really good beta. A beta that is willing to say if something isn't working, and will offer suggestions, or help you work it until it does. I've been really lucky that way.

Have you written any drabbles? That's how I started out. Drabbles are not easy if they're done well, but since they are such a contained package (100 words is not much!) they're really good for helping you learn to focus on the main ideas and the important stuff.

And posting my drabbles on hardtime100 got me feedback, which started conversations which earned me a beta in the end. Not sure it will work that way for you, but it's worth a chance. Also, when you have something for them to look at, you can probably advertise on an Oz journal and ask for a beta. But you need someone who's

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[slashy_4]

Oh no you don't, the only thing you is giving me some really good ideas =) And as the far as the Kenny-Icon goes....NOTHING......I was out earlier today so, sorry if this doesn't make much sence but i'm rtying right? My computer is going to be kind of born all over again, so I can get a few icons....wouldn't be wrong.
In some eps Kenny's looking pretty DAMN hot........*drewl*
Thanks for the tuos anyway, and you're not lecturing me, if only it's for my own good right =)

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[slashy_4]

Never mind that anonymous comment, that was just a drunk me forgetting to log in =)
Gotta love Crazy-Beecher *S*

No I haven't written any drabbles maybe that's what I should start out with?