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Fic: First-Day Jitters

May 25, 2010 06:50

Title: First-Day Jitters
Author: brate7
Fandom: Supernatural
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1440
Summary: It's time to go to school, but Dean doesn't want to leave Sammy.

( Against his will, John was impressed with Dean's determination, but he couldn't let the boy call the shots. )

fic, supernatural

Comments 11

anu24 May 25 2010, 16:16:08 UTC

Aww that was awesome. This is one of the most adorable weechester fics I have read.

"No, Dean stays wit me. He mine," he declared as only a three-year-old could.

Aww Sammy! I loved that he wouldn't let Dean go and that Dean was the one to calm him down. Sam refusing the ice-cream and wanting to go home and wait for Dean just melted my heart.

I'm sorry I know I'm not making much sense but what I want to say is I loved this. Great job! ^^

borgmama1of5 May 25 2010, 17:02:53 UTC

The flip from Dean not wanting to leave Sam to Sam not wanting to leave Dean was perfect!

I appreciated this glimpse because I've always wondered what those early years of school were like for Dean.

specialagentldy May 25 2010, 19:38:52 UTC

Love this! :-D

aesop_jack May 25 2010, 23:25:39 UTC

That was wonderful and sweet. Thanks for sharing it.

nong_pradu May 26 2010, 03:10:50 UTC

D'awwwww... So cute, with just the tiniest undercurrent of sadness.

I would imagine there'd have been serious separation issues for Dean during those early years. As an adult he's pretty co-dependent on his family, and as a small child (recently traumatized by the death of his mother), I imagine he would have been even worse.

This was just a delight to read. Thanks for sharing it!