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brassebouillon

WASTED (part 13/13)

May 13, 2009 14:57

I am so very sorry for updating this story so so late...I'm a lazy person and I've been quite busy, so...

Summary : for Cheekymice's funfic challenge. My prompt was "anorexia". This fanfic set in early first season, just after Thanksgiving and is AU.
Beta : Thanks to the incredible Helen C for betaing this fanfic!
Disclaimers : The characters and ( Read more... )

wasted, cheekymice's challenge

Comments 10

helen_c May 13 2009, 15:17:31 UTC

J'ai adoré cette fanfic! (Je ne suis même pas sûre que je te l'avais dit en répondant à ton mail--à force de faire 6 ou 7 trucs en même temps, on ne fait rien correctement, c'est logique), mais j'ai vraiment bien aimé! :))

brassebouillon May 16 2009, 15:35:14 UTC

Merci! Et surtout merci de l'avoir bétaé (ouh, le beau néologisme, JCVD n'aurait pas fait mieux!)

katwoman76 May 13 2009, 21:21:12 UTC

Lovely ending for this story. Thanks for the new chapter.

brassebouillon May 16 2009, 15:35:32 UTC

Thanks for your nice comment! I'm glad you've liked it!

indigorayne May 13 2009, 22:54:49 UTC

Thank you for the update! It made my day. :)

brassebouillon May 16 2009, 15:35:56 UTC

Thanks for this comment! It's really sweet of you! I'm glad you've liked it!

benlust June 19 2009, 00:14:36 UTC

I really enjoyed this story and was so happy to see the update. I love the way you capture the personalities and mannerisms of Ryan and the Cohens. Great story!

beachtree June 25 2009, 01:10:40 UTC

Somehow, I didn't think you'd updated any WIP, so I obviously missed this.

It was such a tumultuous journey, and one that chronicles what I always believed was a very difficult, painful, ongoing series of transitions for a lonely and alienated Ryan- and for which he had very little guidance and support. I still become upset and angry at how anyone only paid attention to Ryan when it suited them and wasn't inconvenient- or was completely unavoidable. His life really was a series of broken promises and navigating uncharted territory all alone.

In this case, even the people around him had to be shocked into realization and action, I'm glad something prompted them. Canon Ryan fared far worse.

Thanks for a hopeful, but not trite and simplistic ending. There's no way it could be neat and "fixed," only more positive and with some semblance of stability for Ryan with a little more security, even if precarious. I don't think he would ever move past his numerous scars, but he could have help in identifying and dealing with them.