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brassebouillon

What goes around (Round Robin fic, part 7)

Jun 15, 2008 12:51

Title: What Goes Around
Background: Post "The Girlfriend." Angst, AU, and R rating.
Ground rules: This is a round robin fic. The first person to claim it in a comment writes the next part and posts it as soon as they want or at least by... hopefully next week. The installment can be any length, change style, genre, POV, and go in any direction at ( Read more... )

round robin fic

Comments 29

katwoman76 June 15 2008, 11:23:34 UTC

Great update. You had my heart in a vice-like grip the whole time I read this. Can't wait for more.
Does this story really still count as PG? I don't really know the rating system so well, but the rating sounds a little weak IMHO for this story. *shrug*

brassebouillon June 15 2008, 14:26:49 UTC

Thanks for commenting! What rate should I give it? I really have no idea! (Yeah, I'm guilty, I copy/paste it!!)

chrisear June 15 2008, 11:37:53 UTC

amazing update

brassebouillon June 15 2008, 14:27:24 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it

anonymous June 15 2008, 13:44:38 UTC

Ooh, nice addition to the story! I liked the way you handled Mute!Ryan. :)

p.s. It's absolutely fine that you linked this to my LJ. I can't do that, so I had to copy/paste.

p.p.s. I think Katwoman's right; I think that we DO need to up the rating. I should have, during my part, but I didn't even think about it. Sorry.

brassebouillon June 15 2008, 14:27:58 UTC

Thanks for commenting! What rate should I give to this story? I've no idea!

teachertam June 15 2008, 17:14:59 UTC

I'm not the best at rating stories, so I usually just go with "adult," largely because my stories are all so dark. I'd say that, by the time the pictures were described, this story became at least an "R." But I don't know.

I loved your update. Thank you for doing something great with my little "mute" cliffhanger. :)

katwoman76 June 15 2008, 17:48:07 UTC

Yes, I think at least R for the last 3 chapters or so, since the content of the pictures is revealed.

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alluxera June 15 2008, 15:05:42 UTC

Wow, that was really intense. I like how the story turned out with the different writers, you all gave it a personal touch and I so hope that somebody will continue with it. Thank you for this chapter.

brassebouillon June 15 2008, 16:55:02 UTC

Thanks for commenting! I really hope someone's gonna continue this fanfic because it's such a good idea to be a lot of people writting it!

jonsmom14 June 15 2008, 17:58:08 UTC

Gotta love Sandy and Kirsten. You did a great job here. I could almost see Ryan's panic attack on the beach. I was on the edge of my seat. Super Sandy to the rescue!

brassebouillon June 16 2008, 08:21:00 UTC

Thanks for commenting! I'm a huge fan of parenting!Kandy...