How does Teal'c name SG-1 in his head?
OK. Here's a question. How does Teal'c think about the members of SG-1. I was going with O'Neill, SamanthaCarter, and DanielJackson, but when you are spending a lot of time inside Teal'c's head, this formulation seems a little burdensome.
"There are things I know I should care about, but I don't anymore," DanielJackson said thoughtfully.
"Definitely," O'Neill agreed. They seemed lethargic, lulled by the warmth of the sun. Teal'c himself had been drowsing on the beach, waiting for them to awaken. O'Neill's head rested on DanielJackson's chest. He idly stroked the smooth skin of SamanthCarter's warm back.
"That could be a problem," SamanthaCarter commented, voice slurred with sleep and contentment.
"Only if the new perspective causes us to make bad decisions," O'Neill disagreed.
"We declined to remain in quarantine so the SGC could try to help us," DanielJackson pointed out. He stretched his arms long over head, back arching luxuriously. O'Neill lifted his head long enough to glare at him, then they all resettled around DanielJackson's shifted position.
"Fraiser gets lucky some times and she has amazing staff, but I don't think it was an error in judgment to decide we didn't want to be prisoners. They couldn't even pick a good planet for us. We were stuck out in the middle of a big prairie, when this place was in their database." O'Neill shut his eyes, as if the long excursion into argument were tiring and he might go back to sleep.
DanielJackson hummed. Teal'c couldn't tell if it was agreement, demurral, or sun-warmed contentment.
"I'm really OK with the whole hunt-and-eat-raw-prey thing," SamanthaCarter interjected.
"I think we only need to worry about that if you start doing it while in human form," DanielJackson said with a chuckle.
"I don't care that I'm having sex with both of you," O'Neill said bluntly. "Or rather, I like having sex with both of you, I'd do it right now, in human form, and I really don't care."
"Huh, that seems like a problematic one," Samantha Carter replied, despite the fact that her leg was lying across DanielJackson's naked penis, her bare breasts pressed against his naked torso.
"Maybe," O'Neill murmured. "Daniel smells really good, even to my human nose." SamanthaCarter buried her nose in DanielJackson's hair and inhaled deeply.
"I agree," she said.
What do you think? Too much, or does it work, even coming fast and thick like that? I could change to Teal'c thinking of them all by full first name - Jonathan, Daniel, Samantha? I could also do an added little bit at the beginning where Teal'c thinks about their names and expresses his fondness for Tau'ri nicknames which he would never speak because they are disrespectful, or whatever, but he still thinks them because they are wonderful to him - something?
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"There are things I know I should care about, but I don't anymore," DanielJackson said thoughtfully.
"Definitely," O'Neill agreed. They seemed lethargic, lulled by the warmth of the sun. Teal'c himself had been drowsing on the beach, waiting for them to awaken. O'Neill's head rested on DanielJackson's chest. He idly stroked the smooth skin of SamanthCarter's warm back.
"That could be a problem," SamanthaCarter commented, voice slurred with sleep and contentment.
"Only if the new perspective causes us to make bad decisions," O'Neill disagreed.
"We declined to remain in quarantine so the SGC could try to help us," DanielJackson pointed out. He stretched his arms long over head, back arching luxuriously. O'Neill lifted his head long enough to glare at him, then they all resettled around DanielJackson's shifted position.
"Fraiser gets lucky some times and she has amazing staff, but I don't think it was an error in judgment to decide we didn't want to be prisoners. They couldn't even pick a good planet for us. We were stuck out in the middle of a big prairie, when this place was in their database." O'Neill shut his eyes, as if the long excursion into argument were tiring and he might go back to sleep.
DanielJackson hummed. Teal'c couldn't tell if it was agreement, demurral, or sun-warmed contentment.
"I'm really OK with the whole hunt-and-eat-raw-prey thing," SamanthaCarter interjected.
"I think we only need to worry about that if you start doing it while in human form," DanielJackson said with a chuckle.
"I don't care that I'm having sex with both of you," O'Neill said bluntly. "Or rather, I like having sex with both of you, I'd do it right now, in human form, and I really don't care."
"Huh, that seems like a problematic one," Samantha Carter replied, despite the fact that her leg was lying across DanielJackson's naked penis, her bare breasts pressed against his naked torso.
"Maybe," O'Neill murmured. "Daniel smells really good, even to my human nose." SamanthaCarter buried her nose in DanielJackson's hair and inhaled deeply.
"I agree," she said.
What do you think? Too much, or does it work, even coming fast and thick like that? I could change to Teal'c thinking of them all by full first name - Jonathan, Daniel, Samantha? I could also do an added little bit at the beginning where Teal'c thinks about their names and expresses his fondness for Tau'ri nicknames which he would never speak because they are disrespectful, or whatever, but he still thinks them because they are wonderful to him - something?
Crossposted at "http://brainofck.dreamwidth.org/318270.html"