Fic: By-The-Sea V: A Day At The Beach (1/3)

[bradygirl_12]

Title: By-The-Sea V: A Day At The Beach (1/3)
Author: BradyGirl_12
Pairings/Characters (this chapter): Steve/Diana, Clark/Bruce
Genres: Challenge, Fluff, Romance, Slice-Of-Life
Rating (this chapter): PG-13
Claim: For the dcu_freeforall Challenge (Clark/Bruce)Prompt: T 16; P 50: Ocean/Sea

Comments

[saavikam77]

Hee!! :D I totally love this, the four of them sharing an airy cottage, Clark making waffles, Bruce getting up WAY late. XD Such a relaxing piece. I can't wait for the rest! :D

[bradygirl_12]

Hee!! :D I totally love this, the four of them sharing an airy cottage, Clark making waffles, Bruce getting up WAY late. XD Such a relaxing piece. I can't wait for the rest! :D

*grins*

This story is going to be total sappy fluff! :)

I'm glad you enjoyed this, Saavi! :)

[ilovetobefree]

Steve brushed back a wave of dark hair from Diana’s face, skimming his lips over her ear.
I loved your description of Steve awakening and watching Diana. He - brushing her hair back and kissing her shoulder - that were beautifully written moments. :)

Clark turned with a sunny smile. “Good morning, Steve. Would you like some waffles?”
Love some.” Steve sat at the bar and gratefully accepted a mug of coffee.
Awwww - Waffles made by Clark - I would love some too. :)

No matter how often he was in close contact with the people in this cottage, he still couldn’t quite wrap his mind around the fact that Superman was in this bright kitchen making him waffles!
:D I don’t blame him at all. (I love this image :))

Vermont maple syrup
Oh, „Vermont finest“. You reminded me Clark on Smallville.(I liked it.) :)

Clark was who he really was, not just a cover for Superman.
You know, I really loved this line. Well said!

“True, but you fill out both suits admirably, Angel.”
Diana smiled. “Your flattery pleases me, Beloved.”That was lovely to see them

[bradygirl_12]

Steve brushed back a wave of dark hair from Diana’s face, skimming his lips over her ear.

I loved your description of Steve awakening and watching Diana. He - brushing her hair back and kissing her shoulder - that were beautifully written moments. :)

Thank you! I'm a sap for early-morning wake-up scenes. ;)

Clark turned with a sunny smile. "Good morning, Steve. Would you like some waffles?"

"Love some." Steve sat at the bar and gratefully accepted a mug of coffee.

Awwww - Waffles made by Clark - I would love some too. :)

LOL! Me, too! :)

No matter how often he was in close contact with the people in this cottage, he still couldn’t quite wrap his mind around the fact that Superman was in this bright kitchen making him waffles!

:D I don’t blame him at all. (I love this image :))

I know! Can you imagine? :)

Vermont maple syrup
Oh, „Vermont finest“. You reminded me Clark on Smallville.(I liked it.) :)

Vermont maple syrup is the best! :)

Clark was who he really was, not just a cover for Superman

[cold_nostalgia]

*gushes* Wonderful stuff, can't wait to read more:)

[bradygirl_12]

*gushes* Wonderful stuff, can't wait to read more:)

Thanks, CN! I'm working on the second chapter now. :)

[ctbn60]

This was great! It's nice to see a normal day not filled with all of the craziness that enters their lives. I like how clark referred to Diana and Bruce as their royalty. Sweet! Totally enjoyable.

[bradygirl_12]

This was great! It's nice to see a normal day not filled with all of the craziness that enters their lives.

I do like showing our heroes enjoying ordinary fun. :)

I like how clark referred to Diana and Bruce as their royalty. Sweet! Totally enjoyable.

*grins*

Yes, one must cater to the royalty! ;)

Glad you enjoyed this chapter, hon! :)

[ctbn60]

*bounce*

You know I didn't realize this was only part one! *smacks head* I get more! Cool!

[bradygirl_12]

*bounce*

You know I didn't realize this was only part one! *smacks head* I get more! Cool!

*grins*

Yep, two more chapters! The second one is on the beach and the third is the cook-out in the evening. Covers all the bases! ;)

[starsandsea]

Ooooh! The four of them by the sea! How pretty! :)

I'm looking forward to more! :)

[bradygirl_12]

Ooooh! The four of them by the sea! How pretty! :)

I'm looking forward to more! :)

*grins*

Thank you, Star! :)

The second chapter should be up soon! :)