Fic: By-The-Sea V: A Day At The Beach (1/3)

[bradygirl_12]

Title: By-The-Sea V: A Day At The Beach (1/3)
Author: BradyGirl_12
Pairings/Characters (this chapter): Steve/Diana, Clark/Bruce
Genres: Challenge, Fluff, Romance, Slice-Of-Life
Rating (this chapter): PG-13
Claim: For the dcu_freeforall Challenge (Clark/Bruce)Prompt: T 16; P 50: Ocean/Sea

Comments

[ilovetobefree]

Steve brushed back a wave of dark hair from Diana’s face, skimming his lips over her ear.
I loved your description of Steve awakening and watching Diana. He - brushing her hair back and kissing her shoulder - that were beautifully written moments. :)

Clark turned with a sunny smile. “Good morning, Steve. Would you like some waffles?”
Love some.” Steve sat at the bar and gratefully accepted a mug of coffee.
Awwww - Waffles made by Clark - I would love some too. :)

No matter how often he was in close contact with the people in this cottage, he still couldn’t quite wrap his mind around the fact that Superman was in this bright kitchen making him waffles!
:D I don’t blame him at all. (I love this image :))

Vermont maple syrup
Oh, „Vermont finest“. You reminded me Clark on Smallville.(I liked it.) :)

Clark was who he really was, not just a cover for Superman.
You know, I really loved this line. Well said!

“True, but you fill out both suits admirably, Angel.”
Diana smiled. “Your flattery pleases me, Beloved.”
That was lovely to see them bot to be so gentle and devoted to each other. Nice to see their love for one another.

Bruce sidled up to Clark and pulled him in for a kiss. “I can get ready in five minutes.”
“We’ll be gone at 5:01.”
That was amazing. I so loved the kiss and Clark’s answer. :)

“Told you I’d be ready.”
Clark turned and smiled as he saw Bruce in dark-blue trunks, sandals, and unbuttoned shirt. He was wearing sunglasses and was carrying the beach chairs that Clark had left behind, a terrycloth blanket slung over a broad shoulder.
I was glad Bruce made it in time. And the description of Bruce was hot.

As always I enjoyed the way you describe things, characters, surrounding as well as brilliantly written dialogue between characters in this story. Excellently done!

Thanks for sharing this lovely story, BradyGirl. I look forward to the next chapter. :)
LS.

[bradygirl_12]

Steve brushed back a wave of dark hair from Diana’s face, skimming his lips over her ear.

I loved your description of Steve awakening and watching Diana. He - brushing her hair back and kissing her shoulder - that were beautifully written moments. :)

Thank you! I'm a sap for early-morning wake-up scenes. ;)

Clark turned with a sunny smile. "Good morning, Steve. Would you like some waffles?"

"Love some." Steve sat at the bar and gratefully accepted a mug of coffee.

Awwww - Waffles made by Clark - I would love some too. :)

LOL! Me, too! :)

No matter how often he was in close contact with the people in this cottage, he still couldn’t quite wrap his mind around the fact that Superman was in this bright kitchen making him waffles!

:D I don’t blame him at all. (I love this image :))

I know! Can you imagine? :)

Vermont maple syrup
Oh, „Vermont finest“. You reminded me Clark on Smallville.(I liked it.) :)

Vermont maple syrup is the best! :)

Clark was who he really was, not just a cover for Superman.

You know, I really loved this line. Well said!

Thanks. I figure that he grew up as Clark, not Superman! :)

"True, but you fill out both suits admirably, Angel."

Diana smiled. "Your flattery pleases me, Beloved."

That was lovely to see them bot to be so gentle and devoted to each other. Nice to see their love for one another.

I love writing them. They are such a sweet, romantic couple. :)

Bruce sidled up to Clark and pulled him in for a kiss. "I can get ready in five minutes."

"We’ll be gone at 5:01."

That was amazing. I so loved the kiss and Clark’s answer. :)

Has to keep his Prince on his toes! :)

"Told you I’d be ready."

Clark turned and smiled as he saw Bruce in dark-blue trunks, sandals, and unbuttoned shirt. He was wearing sunglasses and was carrying the beach chairs that Clark had left behind, a terrycloth blanket slung over a broad shoulder.

I was glad Bruce made it in time. And the description of Bruce was hot.

Bruce is always hot, even on a cool day! ;)

As always I enjoyed the way you describe things, characters, surrounding as well as brilliantly written dialogue between characters in this story. Excellently done!

Thanks for sharing this lovely story, BradyGirl. I look forward to the next chapter. :)

LS.

Thank you, m'dear! I always appreciate your comments. :)