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Fic: Top Gun (3/4)

Feb 25, 2009 18:38

Title: Top Gun (3/4)
Author: BradyGirl
Pairings/Characters (this chapter): Steve/Diana, Greg Tolliver, Del Rayner, Jack Sullivan, Aaron Krazniak, Tina Collinsworth, Anne Halliday
Genres: Challenge, Drama
Rating (this chapter): PG-13
Claim: For the dcu_freeforall Challenge (Diana/Steve)Prompt: T 8; P 44: Pilot ( Read more... )

steve trevor/wonder woman, dcu_freeforall, steve trevor/diana prince, top gun, challenge

Comments 9

ibis_thoth February 25 2009, 23:52:12 UTC

A beautiful story. I think I love the fact that she's being given the horns of a dilemma needing Athena's wisdom and Aphrodite's mercy.

bradygirl_12 February 26 2009, 01:24:21 UTC

A beautiful story. I think I love the fact that she's being given the horns of a dilemma needing Athena's wisdom and Aphrodite's mercy.

Thank you! That's a beautiful way of putting it.:)

crimsonquills February 26 2009, 06:19:17 UTC

If this was another author, that "Ah, it will be soon" might worry me. I've read more than one fic with noble but misguided sacrificing of a relationship for the sake of the other person...but I'm pretty sure you wouldn't do that, so I'm just looking forward to seeing how it'll be all right. :-D

bradygirl_12 February 26 2009, 16:15:06 UTC

starsandsea February 26 2009, 18:59:32 UTC

I don't know, I 'awww'ed over Diana rescuing Steve! And there's not much more he could have done, himself, is there? ;)

I loved the descriptions of the party and the people there! And Diana being such a role model. :)

bradygirl_12 February 26 2009, 19:27:13 UTC

I don't know, I 'awww'ed over Diana rescuing Steve! And there's not much more he could have done, himself, is there? ;)

*grins*

People with an agenda are rarely logical! ;)

I loved the descriptions of the party and the people there! And Diana being such a role model. :)

Thank you! Diana enjoys a good party but understands her duty! :)

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bradygirl_12 February 27 2009, 17:46:44 UTC

"Thank you. Young girls should realize their full potential."

"You inspire them."

;) YES. That's absolutely the way they should be.

Always! :)

Also, I adore Hal's little mention. ;)

*grins*

saavikam77 March 2 2009, 20:14:13 UTC

Awwww... I love the way you balanced this chapter with Diana's concern over Steve not getting to do what he loved most.

And of course, the talk with the hostess and other woman was just perfect. :)

bradygirl_12 March 2 2009, 23:28:24 UTC

Awwww... I love the way you balanced this chapter with Diana's concern over Steve not getting to do what he loved most.

She realizes his sacrifice! ;)

And of course, the talk with the hostess and other woman was just perfect. :)

Thank you! Diana never passes up a chance to spread her word. :)