Kinuka vs Yukio; Kinuka vs Kimasu

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http://community.livejournal.com/br_roleplay_2/177807.html

This is a double vote:

Kinuka Asano vs Yukio Inokuma: Kill, Wound or Fail?

Kinuka Asano vs Kimasu Harunashi: Kill, Wound or Fail?

The time is 16:55 GMT (+0). Vote now! Votes are screened; good luck to all concerned ^^

Comments

Wound - Wound

[anbyrobanby]

Kinuka is lovely. In a mean way. She's showing herself as being the most ruthless member of the Clique (in my view), and also one of the fullest in fleshing-out. David II's been doing a good job with this. She's bitter, but in an understated kinda way.

To Yukio. Oh, he's funny XD I love him for being a pompous git, not just because he's well-written, but he's just so damned believable. I think we can all think of the type who has intelligence and drive but never seems to earn respect. I think Ian's writing of this has been clear and dynamic.

For these two, I'm thinking WOUND. Because they're very closely matched.

Moving to Kimasu. I think in the past, I've stated some worries about how Kimasu has come across, and how the pure reason he is a sociopath makes him seem OOC at times, when in fact the simple reason he is sociopathic means this is actually correct characterisation. It's been a tricky catch-22. Since that's been flagged, though, I like how Tomar's been taking him in a different direction, without altering the trajectory too suddenly or too sharply. It's been a smooth transition. Also must give credit to the escape plan, and the detail given to what's been needed for tools and personel, as well as how Kimasu reacts to being a leader.

On the whole though, I think Kinuka is stronger on writing, though. However, I want to recognise the improvments and tweaking that Tomar's been doing to Kimasu. That's what makes me swing my vote to a Wound.

Rawr.