Kazuo Kiriyama vs Shogo Kawada!

[anbyrobanby]

http://community.livejournal.com/br_roleplay/700856.html

Here is Kazuo Kiriyama attempting on Shogo Kawada!

24 hours, comments screened, usual drill.

Kill, Wound, Fail? The time is 10:14pm GMT.

Best of luck, Tomar! :D

Comments

Kill...

[izunami]

Starting with Kazuo here. I'm so impressed with what Tomar has done with him. I haven't been in the com as long as some people but I honestly can't remember reading a Kazuo that was this interesting for me. He's interesting, he keeps developing in terms of a plot and has really come a long way since the start of this version. Tomar's writing is good, it's not the strongest in this version but it's good enough to hold up the character he's made. PC interaction has been good, completely believable.

Rob is probably one of the strongest writers in this com. Every Shogo post for me has been interesting, well written, well structured, and completely canon. PC interaction has been fine as well. My only problem with Shogo is just that by this point in the version, he should be a lot further along. I know Rob has been really busy but Shogo has ended up on the back burner and I don't think he ever got taken off of it. There is absolutely nothing wrong with what Rob has done with Shogo, just that there really isn't enough of it to match the development of the rest of the characters, Kazuo included.

Even though Rob does have a definite edge on writing ability for me, Kazuo is much more developed at this point and I think it's enough to warrant a kill.

Good game Rob.