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Feb 11, 2011 16:09

My review queue consists of a seven chapter story that is roughly 150 pages long and this:



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*sobs* We'll see what happens.  I told Trainer Robert that it might be awhile because, yeah, 150 pages of story to read?  x_X I decided to review three chapters, which is, oh, say, seventy pages?

I do like this Trainer Robert kid (he's the guy that I went "squee!" over in my other LJ entry).  He left me some fun gems in his review.

In reference to an almost sex scene in my story:

"As for the Dawn and Lucas scene..Those are the ones, I'm not really into XD That and I was really lost at first @_@. I was about to say with my mouth open wide. "When did Dawn, get the courage?!" lol XD."

"Phew, took me awhile, but manage to read all of the chapters. While I have to say, I'm not into most of the things, that are in these later chapters. But just couldn't help but to read on XD"

You dirty, dirty boy, Robert.  Cursive hand writing.

Edit:


ARE YOU NOT JEALOUS?

sppf, reviewing makes bree's head asplode, i think she's delusional

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