FIC- A drastic change [4/?]

Nov 14, 2010 21:01

Title: A drastic change [4/?]  
Pairing: Eunhyuk/Donghae (Eunhae) maybe more in future chapters.
Rating: PG-13 in this chapter
Summary: There is a mystery surrounding a monster that's turning people into werewolves and murdering them after their first shift, Eunhyuk is asked to investigate the issue with the help of the only victim that ( Read more... )

fanfic, donghae, eunhae, eunhyuk, super junior

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rayneweather November 15 2010, 04:50:09 UTC
Somehow I missed the last chapter; I'm glad I got caught up tonight. Donghae's realization of Hyukjae's clumsiness last chapter made me laugh so hard. However, he still remains a very traumatized young man. Good thinking on Geng's part to put him in Hyukjae's room. Even if Hae doesn't realize why he's so calm in there, his body certainly responds to the smell of his mate.

Woah, somebody wants Donghae really badly. There's still so much that doesn't make sense, though. Does the 'monster' want Donghae just because he's one that got away or is he really special & the other turnings/killings were just leading up to him. I'm sure you'll explain all that in future chapters.

It would be great to see Donghae's turning from Hyukjae's point of view. Even though he looked very calm & accepting of everything from Donghae's perspective a lot had to have been going through his mind & emotions given what's happened in previous chapters. How willing was he to go & witness Hae's change? Was it so that he could get information that would help the case? Did part of him (mainly the wolf part) want to experience it since Donghae is his mate? Or did he get roped into it by the alpha & beta?

Even if he wasn't thrilled about doing it Hyukjae was really sweet to not show any irritation towards Donghae throughout the difficult day and to show him the ropes of being a wolf. He even let Donghae share a bed with him. Either Donghae's finally growing on him or Hyukjae is a fantastic actor.

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boredkitty November 15 2010, 05:36:16 UTC
It's the first time I've gotten such a long comment!!! I love long comments ;A; lol

I know things don't make much sense now but I promise that with Hyuk and Hae's meeting with Hyuk's mysterious informant things will start to make sense :3

Hyuk cares for Hae, he cares enough to not rape him, so I can assure you there's some deepness in his feelings lol, I'll write next chapter in Hyuk's POV :D

Thank you so much for reading and commenting, I'm really happy <333

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rayneweather November 15 2010, 22:14:07 UTC
You're welcome for the long comment. I often think out loud or muse about certain things knowing that I probably won't get answers other than "read future chapters to find out". Guess it's just a way for me to think through the whole chapter & try to make sense out of it. I often miss clues or am totally clueless so this helps. :-P

Ahh, that's true about Hyuk keeping his hands to himself. If he wanted to be a total jerk he could just claim Hae as his, especially since he's the only one that Donghae feels comfortable around. He definitely had a lot of patience with the poor pup in the last chapter.

Yay, I'm looking forward to Hyuk's POV in the next chapter. Best wishes for finishing uni, it can be a giant pain in the butt I know.

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