Fic: Clandestine

[bob_fish]

Title: Clandestine
Characters: Ed/Ling, Greed 2.0, Darius and Heinkel
Word Count: 2391
Rating: a fairly mild NC-17 for boysex. Oh, and Ed swears. Would you credit that?
Summary: You can only be in the great outdoors so long before you start dreaming of hot showers. And of dumping the people you're travelling with in them.
Notes: Takes place

Comments

[a_big_apple]

ED IS SUCH A NERD! This was really cute. I feel bad for Darius and Heinkel.

[bob_fish]

Glad you enjoyed! I feel bad for D and H too, but revenge is easy for them because it's laughably easy to reduce Ed to a state of flailing embarrassment.

[driftwoodwings]

LAUGHING SO HARD. God Ed you are such a dork ahahegehgheheg *dies*.

Things being thrown at wall = Nice.

[bob_fish]

Thanks! I know, he's such a nerd. *glomps Ed*

[slinkysoul]

Giggling forever. 8'D

I always do a very un-manly little squeal of joy whenever I see you've written something new. Very much liking the Ling-kitten comparison, and dorky!Ed, as always, is utterly delightful. ^^~

...Poor Darius and Heinkel. XD Keep up the awesomeness!

[bob_fish]

Thanks so much! Glad that you're enjoying, and that I could make you do a very unmanly squeal of joy. I wanted to make a joke here about the fact that this fic is basically about Ling attempting to make Ed make unmanly squealing noises, but I didn't quite get there. XD

I can never stop looking at your icon. They're having so much fun with their camp little hip-wiggles!

[pandoraculpa]

I can only imagine what it must be like, traveling with Ed and Ling. (actually, I don't have to imagine, since you keep throwing these amazing tidbits out there!) Darius and Heinkel have pretty remarkable tolerances! As much as I love the sexy!times with the two pretty boys, the glimpses of that longsuffering pair are just as enjoyable.

(now I'm imagining a story entirely from one of their POVs, regarding the situation. Not imagining it too hard, however; I've got too many bunnies as it is, and the buggers breed)

Honestly, I adore all of these interminable camping trip fics. And we've already gone over my comment!fail, so, er, yeah... but I didn't want to let another one pass by without telling you how much I enjoy them. You've got a real knack for nailing the characterizations, and a nice flair for humor (which is hard as hell to write effectively). And as stupid as it is, it excites me to a ridiculous degree to see the two chimeras getting some attention. I love those two. Yay, moar, moar!

[bob_fish]

Hee hee. Poor Darius and Heinkel. And you don't have to imagine their perspective on the situation any more, 'cause enemytosleep wrote it here.

Interminable is right ... I'm downright embarrassed at how many of these things I've pumped out now (four?) given that they all have pretty much the same 'plot'. Thanks for enjoying and saying nice things!

[pandoraculpa]

Goodness, don't be embarrassed! (HA! still totally medicineheaded, and typed that as embareassed. HAHAHA!) Having a fun premise like that to run with is always a good thing. And I can't help but think that every day was a bit of a circus, considering all the players involved. How could it not be? So keep cranking 'em out- lord knows, no one's complaining! (Least of all Ed and Ling, although the chimeras surely grumble about it- just not too loudly. They know the value of good blackmail material, heh heh heh!)

Ooh, and thanks for the link! I'd missed that somehow. YAYFIC!

[bob_fish]

It's more that pretty much every time I write this camping trip it turns into comedy PWP. I'm sure other stuff must have happened on that trip? It's just that my brain gets distracted by the prospect of writing awkward teenage sexings.

[vwl]

My girl Yin calls it the 'little chestnut'.

I think I laughed for about ten minutes and of course could not explain to my mother why it was funny.

[nijibug]

YOUR EDLING BROFIST ICON *___*

Do you know if an anime version of it exists? I've downloaded the clip here: http://nijibug.livejournal.com/62732.html but have no clue how to gif it

[vwl]

THE FIST BUMP IS MY SECOND FAVORITE PART OF THE MANGA, I'M NOT EVEN LYING.

celestialphoenx made that one for me, since my computer doesn't work right anymore (viruses are lame >:B). She also made this for me because she is amazing:

[bob_fish]

Well, of course Ling would have learnt a daft poetic term, right? XD Glad I could embarrass you in front of your mother.