This One Last Time

Apr 12, 2010 00:09



Title: This One Last Time
Pairing: YooSu
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Rating: Pg-13
Length: Oneshot (poem)
Summary: A love he wanted to hold just this one last time

And just let me love you this one last time. )

genre:drama, genre:angst, pairing:yoosu, type:poem, genre:romance, type:fanfic, length:oneshot, author:blueplue_hotaru, rating:pg-13

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Comments 33

xenia31479 April 11 2010, 16:11:24 UTC
SPOT!!!
Omg bb~~~ it's awesome.. and I am crying TT^TT
Thank uuu <3

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blueplue_hotaru April 11 2010, 16:42:40 UTC
wow!!!
super fast!
*throws confetti!*
^^

oh!
thanks!
and here, take some tissues.
*give you tissues*

hey, thanks for reading and commenting!
^^
i'm glad you like this!

p/s: i guess this is my first angst fic, huh?
hehehe o_0

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sol_valerie April 11 2010, 16:30:52 UTC
bb-ah! you told me not to make yoosu suffer!
so why are you making yoosu suffer in here?
now you're returning the heartaches back to me DDD:

but, but it's beautiful and sad at the same time. you did a great job, bb ;-;

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blueplue_hotaru April 11 2010, 16:52:51 UTC
err....um....0_o
ehehe....*nervous/anxious/scared?*

well, well..um...
i guess we're even, huh?
0_o
*running away from you!*

oh! ^^
thanks!
i feel shy but thanks a lot! ^^

thanks for reading and commenting!

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sol_valerie April 11 2010, 17:00:54 UTC
/points knife at you
ahaha, i'm just joking.

but yeah, i guess we're even. but i don't know about not writing angst in my next story though cuz angst is kind of my fav genre at the moment lol.

this writing proves you're good in angst too. so really, its worth the try :D

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blueplue_hotaru April 11 2010, 17:12:01 UTC
oh!
*shields myself with yoosu? 0_o*
kkk...^^

aw...*blushed*
i guess so...i'm just okay and i want to be better next time. ^^

well, i don't know if i ever write angst-ier than you but maybe i can try...

p/s: the heartaches from that story of yours really deep....
T_T
oh my poor chun!
hey, i guess we both tortured chun in our story huh?
*hides from su!*
^^

p/s/s: aigo, since you like angst now, it means that your next post will be an angst too?
o_0
better order my tissue supplies first!

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blueplue_hotaru April 11 2010, 16:31:26 UTC
spot! for heeartquake.

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heeartquaake April 28 2010, 20:33:16 UTC
bittersweet?
T_T
I LOVE IT! <33

:)

AND I LOVE YOU, UNNI~!! <33
*huggles*

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blueplue_hotaru April 28 2010, 21:46:06 UTC
haha
thanks, dongsaeng!
^^

haha
and yes, i love you too!
=P

p/s: you know what? i was actually thinking about you earlier and right now you commented and i'm replying.

kkk...^^

*huggles*
thanks for reading and commenting,neh?

see you soon!
^^

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heeartquaake April 29 2010, 06:48:27 UTC
o.O
hehehe coincidence much ^_^

*huggles back*
yes yes :)

see you soon as weellssss :)

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lophe April 11 2010, 17:12:30 UTC
wow this is awesome!!!
what a beautiful words... but heartbreaking thought..

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blueplue_hotaru April 11 2010, 17:17:39 UTC
oh! thanks a lot!!! ^^
*hugs*

hmm...well, since i want to write angst and yoosu was the nearest target...*get bricked by yoosu fan*....
so...
i guess...poor yoosu?
*get bricked again*

hmm...yeah...0_o

i'm thinking whether to write for all the pairings or not...
what's your opinion?

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lophe April 11 2010, 17:39:23 UTC
aaah yes poor yoosu.. but you write it so beautiful... *hug you back* ^^

of course it'll be so great if you write for all the pairings... ^o^
but if all of them are angst... oouuww...
it's totally heartbreaking, specially in situation like this..

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blueplue_hotaru April 11 2010, 22:08:30 UTC
um...thanks again!
T_T

hehe i think so too.
^^

0_0
aw!
hmm, i know...it hurts me too to see them being apart like this.

but will you mind if i write an angst for yunchun?

*hides from you*

hehe ^^

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missyoosu April 11 2010, 18:44:18 UTC
How heartbreaking! Poor Yoochun. Very nicely written and expressed.

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blueplue_hotaru April 11 2010, 21:54:13 UTC
oh!
are you okay then?

0_o

need me to send yoosu to do cpr?
kkk...^^

well, thanks a lot!
^^

yup, poor chun but and maybe poor su too?
weird, because how love could also made two person to be apart.
hmm....T_T

^^
thanks a lot again!
*hugs*

thanks for reading and commenting! ^^

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