New Thesis
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New thesis sentence:
Because mainstream America cannot understand the connection between the Ojibwe and their aanikoobijigan, they firmly, if not willingly, remain cultural adversaries to the Native Americans.
Edit: 11:51 PM
I'm doing it too big. I need to focus on the story.
Because the dominant Western culture portrayed in the story cannot understand the profound connection between the Ojibwe and their aanikoobijigan, they firmly, if not willingly, remain cultural adversaries to the Native Americans.
New thesis sentence:
Because mainstream America cannot understand the connection between the Ojibwe and their aanikoobijigan, they firmly, if not willingly, remain cultural adversaries to the Native Americans.
Edit: 11:51 PM
I'm doing it too big. I need to focus on the story.
Because the dominant Western culture portrayed in the story cannot understand the profound connection between the Ojibwe and their aanikoobijigan, they firmly, if not willingly, remain cultural adversaries to the Native Americans.