Birthday fic for iris_aya!

[bluebirdsongs]

Title: Hold Me Just Like This
Pairing: Akame
Rating: G
Genre: Fluff, Romance, Sap
Word count: ~1800
Beta-reader: sou_kiri
Disclaimer: I don't own them, and I'm not making any money off of this.
Warnings: Ridiculous, fluffy sap, emotional!Jin
AN: This is a spin-off of iris_aya 's fic Sweet Devotion, which she wrote for my birthday last week. Since today it's her birthday

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[sou_kiri]

♥ oh (sort of not at all on the subject XD) I mentioned the Akamemaru to my friend and she really wants to read it~ is it ok if I send it on to her? it's my Jin's Kame, she's lovely, I promise XD

Well it was Kame's birthday, you didn't think my Jin would let me go to bed in favour of spending it with Kazu~ but oops, I slept for like a year this morning =_= Ah~ you're about 6 hours behind me 83

And iris_aya has said kind of.. everything I could have XD (and also melted. you have alot of goopy people on your hands X3) but I love all of the small interactions between them ♥ Kame pressing to Jin's shoulder when he laughs, and that he holds him closer when Jin leans in to whisper. Also that Kame is so.. as he is .3.the first time I read it my focus was pretty much entirely on Jin and how cute he is, but Kame is so gentle and loving, and reading him acknowledging and responding to Jin's emotions is pretty much the entire pleasure of Jin being emotional in the first place and anything with Kame and the word 'tender' in the same sentence just ugh ♥

I really like Kame's mother X3 she's like the perfect mum.. (and if she hadn't got in the way, the awesomeness of the corridor scene would have happened *3* which is tons of love before it's even started, as Kame's the one that excuses them but Jin the one that drags them away.) And just so much a;kjnds. It's such a touching scene. You can just feel how devoted they are to eachother, and ontop of that the kiss is proof of how hot nice, totally comitted married sex could be >3> buuut having said that, I love how they spend so much time touching eachother throughout the whole thing but it's just purely love and wanting to be close and not sexual, and even the kiss is intense without being dirty at all~ even if it leads to dirty thoughts .3. and somehow even Jin wanting to drag Kame upstairs isn't overtly sexual, just love ;A;

More love for Kame's mum, and Jin being embarrassed by the attention at the end ♥ The whole thing is just gorgeous and you need to write them in AU situations more often ;3;. Meming it, and if for any reason you ever delete it, I'll never forgive you ;A;

[bluebirdsongs]

Mmm...if she doesn't mind that it's not finished and the positions are kind of off, then sure. xD

Ah, that's right...lol, never mind. ;) I figured it was about six, but only because I remembered the time difference from here to Britain from my Harry Potter-obsessive days. I certainly wasn't creeping on you or anything like that. xD

x33 Yeah, I didn't really realize how much physical contact there was until after I had re-read the whole thing a few times. That's really where the title comes from, because...they hardly stop touching each other throughout the whole thing. @_@; ...x3 I'm glad you liked him. I still can't figure out if this Kame is mine or iris_aya's or what, but I'm happy he came across okay. He does seem to have a pretty good Jin-radar, doesn't he? xD

As pissed as I was at her for breaking them up, the conversation between her and Kame really made up for it. <3 Ah, Jin was just waiting for Kame to make the excuse, because he was radiating waves of, "Need to get out of here nownownownownow," and Kame picked up on those right away. :3 Gaaah, yeeeees, thank you for saying it was non-sexual. That's really what I was going for, and I was slightly concerned that even the kiss was a little too much. But, lol, you really want me to write something that has them doing it against the wall, don't you? ='D

x33 I loooove embarrassing Jin. It's so damn easy. <3 Thank you so much~ I really don't know if I have the imagination to do AUs all the time (I wish I could claim this universe, but it's completely iris_aya's--she came up with CEO!Jin, KindergartenTeacher!Kame, and I just borrowed it...) Lol, I can't see myself deleting it, so don't worry~

ipwjgpiahp I wish I had more time to write a better comment, but dammit, classes. >>; *sigh* I'll be back later~ Thanks again for reading it and for all of your wonderful praise. 83