Birthday fic for iris_aya!

Feb 23, 2010 21:15

Title: Hold Me Just Like This
Pairing: Akame
Rating: G
Genre: Fluff, Romance, Sap
Word count: ~1800
Beta-reader: sou_kiri
Disclaimer: I don't own them, and I'm not making any money off of this.
Warnings: Ridiculous, fluffy sap, emotional!Jin
AN: This is a spin-off of iris_aya 's fic Sweet Devotion, which she wrote for my birthday last week. Since today it's her birthday ( Read more... )

birthday, akame, fic, one-shot

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bluebirdsongs February 24 2010, 03:25:15 UTC
First post reserved for the birthday girl~ 8D I really hope you like it.

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bluebirdsongs February 24 2010, 05:19:38 UTC
I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I was really worried that my biases towards Jin and Kame would result in a portrayal of them that was clearly different than the one you had written in all of the previous stories for this universe, but I went back and re-read them all again after posting this, and I was pleased to see I wasn't as far off as I originally had feared.

Ahaha, if by 'rush it,' you mean 'omit scenes so I could meet the deadline,' I certainly didn't. I just...kind of ignored most of my other obligations today (which, thankfully, didn't end up being all that much). I'm glad I did it, though, if it means I made you happy on your birthday. :3

Can't wait for your longer comment, but don't cut your birthday celebration short just to write it! xD <3

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sou_kiri February 24 2010, 04:23:24 UTC
lol I like that I still qualify as beta when all I did was melt every few paragraphs then keyboard smash you approval of Jin being emotional XD
coherent comment when it's not 4am 8D but you already know I love it ♥

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bluebirdsongs February 24 2010, 05:11:23 UTC
xD Of course you do. Didn't I say I don't feel a fic is complete until I've gotten your seal of approval?

Lol, it amuses me so much when I get mails from you when I know it's the middle of the night/very early morning where you are. My first thought is always something along the lines of, "xD Why aren't you sleeping?! <3" By the way, if you want to figure out the time difference between us, it's just after 11PM here. Anyway, as always, very much looking forward to your longer comment. 8D

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sou_kiri February 24 2010, 14:01:33 UTC
♥ oh (sort of not at all on the subject XD) I mentioned the Akamemaru to my friend and she really wants to read it~ is it ok if I send it on to her? it's my Jin's Kame, she's lovely, I promise XD

Well it was Kame's birthday, you didn't think my Jin would let me go to bed in favour of spending it with Kazu~ but oops, I slept for like a year this morning =_= Ah~ you're about 6 hours behind me 83

And iris_aya has said kind of.. everything I could have XD (and also melted. you have alot of goopy people on your hands X3) but I love all of the small interactions between them ♥ Kame pressing to Jin's shoulder when he laughs, and that he holds him closer when Jin leans in to whisper. Also that Kame is so.. as he is .3.the first time I read it my focus was pretty much entirely on Jin and how cute he is, but Kame is so gentle and loving, and reading him acknowledging and responding to Jin's emotions is pretty much the entire pleasure of Jin being emotional in the first place and anything with Kame and the word 'tender' in the same sentence ( ... )

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bluebirdsongs February 24 2010, 14:51:45 UTC
Mmm...if she doesn't mind that it's not finished and the positions are kind of off, then sure. xD

Ah, that's right...lol, never mind. ;) I figured it was about six, but only because I remembered the time difference from here to Britain from my Harry Potter-obsessive days. I certainly wasn't creeping on you or anything like that. xD

x33 Yeah, I didn't really realize how much physical contact there was until after I had re-read the whole thing a few times. That's really where the title comes from, because...they hardly stop touching each other throughout the whole thing. @_@; ...x3 I'm glad you liked him. I still can't figure out if this Kame is mine or iris_aya's or what, but I'm happy he came across okay. He does seem to have a pretty good Jin-radar, doesn't he? xD

As pissed as I was at her for breaking them up, the conversation between her and Kame really made up for it. <3 Ah, Jin was just waiting for Kame to make the excuse, because he was radiating waves of, "Need to get out of here nownownownownow," and Kame picked up on those ( ... )

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jennishi February 28 2010, 04:42:27 UTC
Love ....this is full of love!

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bluebirdsongs February 28 2010, 04:47:29 UTC
Haha, that was kind of the idea. =) Thanks for reading!

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little1233 February 28 2010, 04:55:08 UTC
I love it, it was sooooooo sweet

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bluebirdsongs February 28 2010, 04:56:46 UTC
Thanks! =)

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