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Nov 30, 2006 01:29

Realizing you're stuck in a tree is a fairly simple conclusion to come by, but your body realizing it's stuck in a tree can result in a complicated biochemical response. The bladder relaxes, my pupils dilate, and the expansion of blood vessels in my muscles, all help when I'm suddenly holding onto the tree by my hands. When I was in third grade I ( Read more... )

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sasquatch00 November 30 2006, 18:15:26 UTC
Ok, i'm read the paragraph like 3 times..and either my brain is not philosophical enough at the moment or i am too dumb to get it or something.

It is definitely an interesting concundrum...

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imposter blueanole December 2 2006, 06:46:30 UTC
Heehee- I see frell was writing in my journal. I haven't seen that in quite some time- thanks for sharing frell, and sorry sandy, for leaving you confused. I had to read it a couple of times too.

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Re: imposter sasquatch00 December 3 2006, 03:54:33 UTC
Can you lik block him or change your password? I love you posting but this will be very very confusing for me.

How are you? Did you get your schedule? I bought my tickets. :-p

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Re: imposter mindfrell December 3 2006, 11:06:15 UTC
Block me? My what a fine set of balls you have.

I'm sorry that the author of a piece of fiction would cause so much trouble for you.

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blueanole December 6 2006, 06:11:41 UTC
i think it's a neat paragraph- is this attached to something else? is there more before or after? you said you like the first sentence, but i rather enjoy the last one.

i don't like to see people arguing on my account- i hope no one's too upset :-/ but i've talked to sandy and to frell... i hope you both are alright now...

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