Yeah, creating something this hot doesn't really require much background explanation. XD
I loved how your writing gave me these yummy mental pictures of Shuuhei writhing on the bed...I agree with him, it's way too hot. Kensei's solution was brilliant, and lots of fun to read. I liked the way you wrote these two together, sexy and sweet, and I give you extra cookies for writing delicious, hot, safe sex. :D A wonderful piece!
An ice dildo! I've never heard of THAT before! XDDD Kensei's a genius, clearly. (I can't help thinking that somewhere, some adult shop sells novelty ice trays shaped like peenies. I'm not sure whether to laugh or shudder with horror at the thought.)
It is a rather strange power for a Hollow to have, making its opponents uncontrollably lustful from getting cut with its blade, but porn makes its own rules. Logic? Porn has no need for logic!
My only "complaint" (if it can even be called that) is your use of the phrase "former vizard." I don't think it's something that goes away. He's still part Shinigami, part Hollow (right? Unless there's a huge, unexplored backstory to this piece), so he's still a Visored. Maybe "former exile" would be more appropriate, since obviously Kensei's back at his post as Captain of the 9th Division.
XDD I came across it via the kink_wiki on DW that kink_bingo uses 8D (Probably, hey if you can get pasta shaped like that then why not ice cubes XDDD)
Nope especially for a PWP XDD The hollow might have been a tentacle hollow only its aphrodisiacs evidently don't work fast enough - or something, I haven't thought about this.
DDDD: I thought I'd managed to avoid those ;3; I used to use that phrase but whilst writing this it (only just - stupid brain) occured to me that that makes no sense! Excuse me whilst I go change them in shame and poke Zu-chan for not spotting it XDD;;;;
Very yummy, I think the image of Shuuhei writhing on his bed is currently imbedded in my brain; which is not a bad thing. And the use of the ice dildo was very creative, not something you see often. Excellent piece.
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I loved how your writing gave me these yummy mental pictures of Shuuhei writhing on the bed...I agree with him, it's way too hot. Kensei's solution was brilliant, and lots of fun to read. I liked the way you wrote these two together, sexy and sweet, and I give you extra cookies for writing delicious, hot, safe sex. :D A wonderful piece!
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Thank you so much ♥ And yay cookies *noms* :DDDD
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It is a rather strange power for a Hollow to have, making its opponents uncontrollably lustful from getting cut with its blade, but porn makes its own rules. Logic? Porn has no need for logic!
My only "complaint" (if it can even be called that) is your use of the phrase "former vizard." I don't think it's something that goes away. He's still part Shinigami, part Hollow (right? Unless there's a huge, unexplored backstory to this piece), so he's still a Visored. Maybe "former exile" would be more appropriate, since obviously Kensei's back at his post as Captain of the 9th Division.
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Nope especially for a PWP XDD The hollow might have been a tentacle hollow only its aphrodisiacs evidently don't work fast enough - or something, I haven't thought about this.
DDDD: I thought I'd managed to avoid those ;3; I used to use that phrase but whilst writing this it (only just - stupid brain) occured to me that that makes no sense! Excuse me whilst I go change them in shame and poke Zu-chan for not spotting it XDD;;;;
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Yeah, if the aphrodisiac isn't fast-acting, the tentacles get no love! Oh well. There's a reason it's called PWP.
Aw, it's no big deal. You can just think of it as a learning opportunity (or something)! ;D
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Mwahaha 8D Well maybe I'll give the tentacles some love, some day
Yup I'll be making sure to keep an eye out for it now
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Thank you <3 It's amazing how kink_wiki over at dreamwidth can give you ideas for a slight twist on perhaps the usual portrayal of a kink >D
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i love your kenshuu fics so much~ this was so hot :'D
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