[fic] touch my fire

Sep 19, 2011 20:22

Title: touch my fire
Rating: NC-17
Beta: live_with_loveDisclaimer: Bleach is not mine ( Read more... )

kink_bingo, fanfic, pairing: muguruma kensei/hisagi shuuhei, fandom: bleach

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yaburetayume September 20 2011, 09:31:26 UTC
An ice dildo! I've never heard of THAT before! XDDD Kensei's a genius, clearly. (I can't help thinking that somewhere, some adult shop sells novelty ice trays shaped like peenies. I'm not sure whether to laugh or shudder with horror at the thought.)

It is a rather strange power for a Hollow to have, making its opponents uncontrollably lustful from getting cut with its blade, but porn makes its own rules. Logic? Porn has no need for logic!

My only "complaint" (if it can even be called that) is your use of the phrase "former vizard." I don't think it's something that goes away. He's still part Shinigami, part Hollow (right? Unless there's a huge, unexplored backstory to this piece), so he's still a Visored. Maybe "former exile" would be more appropriate, since obviously Kensei's back at his post as Captain of the 9th Division.

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blue_eyesgirl September 20 2011, 09:59:02 UTC
XDD I came across it via the kink_wiki on DW that kink_bingo uses 8D (Probably, hey if you can get pasta shaped like that then why not ice cubes XDDD)

Nope especially for a PWP XDD The hollow might have been a tentacle hollow only its aphrodisiacs evidently don't work fast enough - or something, I haven't thought about this.

DDDD: I thought I'd managed to avoid those ;3; I used to use that phrase but whilst writing this it (only just - stupid brain) occured to me that that makes no sense! Excuse me whilst I go change them in shame and poke Zu-chan for not spotting it XDD;;;;

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yaburetayume September 28 2011, 19:41:28 UTC
Phallic pasta?! I've never heard of this and it has roused my prurient interest. >o<;;

Yeah, if the aphrodisiac isn't fast-acting, the tentacles get no love! Oh well. There's a reason it's called PWP.

Aw, it's no big deal. You can just think of it as a learning opportunity (or something)! ;D

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Late replies are late /runs off to spam you blue_eyesgirl October 9 2011, 18:12:40 UTC
Not sure about american sites but the main high street pretty much mainstream sex chain in the UK sells it here

Mwahaha 8D Well maybe I'll give the tentacles some love, some day

Yup I'll be making sure to keep an eye out for it now

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Spammin' ya back...three weeks later! *dies* yaburetayume October 29 2011, 21:46:15 UTC
Well, I have no money to buy it, and I don't think I would anyway, but that's hysterical! Thanks for the link. ^^

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blue_eyesgirl November 15 2011, 23:19:10 UTC
XDD No problem <3

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