Hunt you down

Sep 17, 2011 17:18

Title: Hunt you down
Pairing: Myungsoo/Sungyeol 
Rating: PG-13
Lenght: One-shot, 2, 290 words 
Summary: Would you like to hear the story of the boy with a tainted smile and the smile of a tainted boy?
A/N: Beta-ed by the amazing  kiccy and dedicated to my dear unnie evaa_x3

It’s on days like these when the sky’s crying crystal tears and promises of forgotten summer nights linger in the air that I see them. )

pairing: myungsoo/sungyeol, fandom: infinite, rating: pg-13

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bloodyrose2442 September 17 2011, 14:21:37 UTC
Spot for evaa_x3

You wanted this so you better like it otl and I still feel like it's such a fail

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evaa_x3 September 17 2011, 18:56:41 UTC
DSAJKDHASDLUAHSJKDLASJKAX

NO, I DON'T LIKE IT. I DON'T LIKE IT. I LOVE IT. I LOVE YOU AND THIS STORY AND SO MUCH MORE! DHJASKDHJAS



HOW DO YOU WRITE SO PRETTILY?!

I'M GOING TO GO WASH UP AND REGAIN A BIT OF MY SANITY FIRST AND THEN SPAZ MORE ABOUT THIS IN CAPITAL LETTERS!

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evaa_x3 September 17 2011, 22:51:32 UTC
I WILL POST-QUOTE YOUR STORY BECAUSE I LOVE IT THAT MUCH. OKAY? OKAY WE CAN! /SHOT.

Because he’s beautiful and talented and flawless and a little bit conceited, but when there’s somebody else that gets away with the fame, nothing really matters anymore.

He looks in the mirror and there’s perfection and pride and a small colorless smile hidden in his shadow- but nobody else notices.

perfect, bb. ♥

He looks at Sungyeol and he sees beauty and talent and something more. But there isn’t perfection, and he notices the way lips crack and bleed and laugh at something that wasn’t supposed to be funny.



Myungsoo’s an actor that has reached the peak with his first step, and if he falls, slips even a millimeter lower then it’s the end
;~~~~~~;

Myungsoo doesn’t fail to notice the perfection in the marble white skin (covered by unseen scars and broken hearts, and stained with sins against God), the softness of the lips (ice-cold and unforgiving, unfeeling, inexistent), the grace that his body moves with (fueled by greed and lust and ( ... )

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evaa_x3 September 17 2011, 22:51:58 UTC

Sungyeol who used to wear rainbows and stardust and electricity in his sleeve, and hearts and smiles and happiness over the place his soul would have been..

oh, bb. ♥

But this is Sungyeol- his Sungyeol- and Myungsoo has waited, waited, waited and if he has to, he will wait a little longer, chase a little farther, understand a little more.

(':

Sungyeol is different. He’s a contrast of colors and emotions, and there are words skimming across his skin forming a history only Myungsoo can read and understand and comprehend. And between tales of torture and loneliness and those millions or so sorrys he finds after every second letter he sees those small, small pieces- shards of broken angel hearts that cry every time Myungsoo’s hands touch them- and he hears holy songs and purity, and there’s Heaven somewhere for sure. A Heaven Sungyeol has always deserved to enter; a Heaven Myungsoo has always dreaded seeing. But it’s too late anyways.

i'm crying at this piece of perfection. :'D. i regret nothing.

Both of them have done a sin too ( ... )

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bloodyrose2442 September 26 2011, 15:20:10 UTC
Unnie I am just so extremely glad you liked it 'cause you are an awesome author and btw I'm sorry for being so late with my answer but school's torturing me and yeah~

Just.... you have no idea how much I grinned after reading all of your praises- you definitively deserve something better but excuse my rookie skills in writing for now XD

*hugs and squishes and loves on you ♥*

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evaa_x3 September 28 2011, 22:54:55 UTC
don't worry, bbdoll. (;

i'll always love your stories ♥
they're so beautifully written and your imagery is just --

rookie skills? bb, you write better than i do, and i'm not kidding around here. ♥

/is hugged, squished, and loved on ♥

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