Hunt you down
Title: Hunt you down
Pairing: Myungsoo/Sungyeol
Rating: PG-13
Lenght: One-shot, 2, 290 words
Summary: Would you like to hear the story of the boy with a tainted smile and the smile of a tainted boy?
A/N: Beta-ed by the amazing kiccy and dedicated to my dear unnie evaa_x3
( It’s on days like these when the sky’s crying crystal tears and promises of forgotten summer nights linger in the air that I see them. )
Pairing: Myungsoo/Sungyeol
Rating: PG-13
Lenght: One-shot, 2, 290 words
Summary: Would you like to hear the story of the boy with a tainted smile and the smile of a tainted boy?
A/N: Beta-ed by the amazing kiccy and dedicated to my dear unnie evaa_x3
( It’s on days like these when the sky’s crying crystal tears and promises of forgotten summer nights linger in the air that I see them. )
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You wanted this so you better like it otl and I still feel like it's such a fail
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NO, I DON'T LIKE IT. I DON'T LIKE IT. I LOVE IT. I LOVE YOU AND THIS STORY AND SO MUCH MORE! DHJASKDHJAS
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HOW DO YOU WRITE SO PRETTILY?!
I'M GOING TO GO WASH UP AND REGAIN A BIT OF MY SANITY FIRST AND THEN SPAZ MORE ABOUT THIS IN CAPITAL LETTERS!
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Because he’s beautiful and talented and flawless and a little bit conceited, but when there’s somebody else that gets away with the fame, nothing really matters anymore.
He looks in the mirror and there’s perfection and pride and a small colorless smile hidden in his shadow- but nobody else notices.
perfect, bb. ♥
He looks at Sungyeol and he sees beauty and talent and something more. But there isn’t perfection, and he notices the way lips crack and bleed and laugh at something that wasn’t supposed to be funny.
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Myungsoo’s an actor that has reached the peak with his first step, and if he falls, slips even a millimeter lower then it’s the end
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Myungsoo doesn’t fail to notice the perfection in the marble white skin (covered by unseen scars and broken hearts, and stained with sins against God), the softness of the lips (ice-cold and unforgiving, unfeeling, inexistent), the grace that his body moves with (fueled by greed and lust and ( ... )
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Sungyeol who used to wear rainbows and stardust and electricity in his sleeve, and hearts and smiles and happiness over the place his soul would have been..
oh, bb. ♥
But this is Sungyeol- his Sungyeol- and Myungsoo has waited, waited, waited and if he has to, he will wait a little longer, chase a little farther, understand a little more.
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Sungyeol is different. He’s a contrast of colors and emotions, and there are words skimming across his skin forming a history only Myungsoo can read and understand and comprehend. And between tales of torture and loneliness and those millions or so sorrys he finds after every second letter he sees those small, small pieces- shards of broken angel hearts that cry every time Myungsoo’s hands touch them- and he hears holy songs and purity, and there’s Heaven somewhere for sure. A Heaven Sungyeol has always deserved to enter; a Heaven Myungsoo has always dreaded seeing. But it’s too late anyways.
i'm crying at this piece of perfection. :'D. i regret nothing.
Both of them have done a sin too ( ... )
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I can't even. You're descriptions *wibbles* ;~~~~; it's all so beautiful, like art with words and I can't even think right because my mind has imploded with imagery and magic.
There's so much about this that I love ;_____; the dark feel of it, that sense of the supernatural. You tip toe around the subject, never quite providing anything solid or straightforward, it's all hints and whispers of "immortality" and "sin" and "where his soul would have been". It's perfect, because it's not so vague that the reader can't tell what's going on, but vague enough to leave that lingering sense of mystery.
And now I have to copy-paste my favorite lines because I'm annoying xD
So he corners Sungyeol one morning when the ground is covered with a thin sheet of snow that sparkles like pearls and innocent hearts and broken glass angels. That was like my favorite line in the whole fic, I think. I'm not even sure why orz it just ( ... )
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Haha I'm glad at least my descriptions are fairly satisfying because as you may or may not have noticed I suck at writing dialogues- I mean don't you get bored from all of these words at all?
I just wanna say thank you so so much ♥ you like Junseung too? my first fic featured them but I deleted it 'cause it sucked so bad
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I'm happy I could cheer you up sweety ;v; don't be depressed! *squishes*
Actually, I'll only read Junseung by one author and otherwise I'm a junseob stanning fanatic all the way xD I'm so picky when it comes to otps OTL but I like the gif lol the sense I make /shot
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I love all the moments of "would have been" because in reality he doesn't but in essence he does (okay that made no sense but whatever)
all in all this was really good ;u;
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And don't worry you make perfect sense and just... *hugs* Thank you for taking your time and commenting and complimenting me ♥
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the imagery was amazing and i absolutely loved the characterization and the somewhat, melancholy that rung in the atmosphere of the air. there's a hint of mystery in every word and that makes it even more beautiful than it is.
i absolutely loved the equation, this was an amazing piece ♥
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All in all thank you so much ♥
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