BEER COMMERCIAL FOR SCREENWRITING PROJECT #1

Feb 11, 2009 23:50

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LS SMALL CROWD AROUND STOOL IN ROOM w/ SIX PACK OF BEER PLACED ON TOP, BLACK DRAPES ON WALLS, WOODEN FLOORING.    INDISTINCT MURMURS, QUIET TECHNO MUSIC IN THE BACKGROUND.
CROWD MEMBER #1: What is it?
CROWD MEMBER #2: What does it mean?
CROWD MEMBER #3: Who put this here?

CUT TO ECU CROWD MEMBER #2, THIN PALE WOMAN IN BLACK TIGHTS    QUIET TECHNO MUSIC IN THE BACKGROUND.
CROWD MEMBER #2: It must have some meaning,

CUT TO MS CROWD MEMBER #3, FASHIONABLE WOMAN IN LARGE SUN GLASSES
QUIET TECHNO MUSIC IN THE BACKGROUND.
CROWD MEMBER #3: evaluate the color patterns, the aesthetic principles!

CUT TO ECU CROWD MEMBER #4, MAN IN GLASSES, ACADEMIC    QUIET TECHNO MUSIC IN THE BACKGROUND.
CROWD MEMBER #4: What societal impact does it have? Is it a representation of the class struggle?

CUT TO LS, YOUNG WOMAN WALKS IN, PUSHES IN TO CIRCLE.    QUIET TECHNO MUSIC IN THE BACKGROUND FADES OUT
INDISTINCT MURMURS

CUT TO MS YOUNG WOMAN WALKING INTO CROWD, PICKING UP 6 PACK OFF THE STOOL. SHE SPEAKS THEN WALKS OUT.    YOUNG WOMAN: It’s beer, you drink it. SLIGHT PAUSE. What’s wrong with you? Don’t you have real problems to deal with?

CUTAWAY, CU YOUNG, FIT WOMAN IN BAR CLINKING BOTTLES WITH FRIEND IN CROWDED BAR    ROCK AND ROLL MUSIC
YOUNG WOMAN & FRIEND: To beer!

CUT AWAY, LS CROWD, YOUNG WOMAN IS ABSENT:    CROWD MEMBER #1: oh, that makes sense.

CUT TO BLACK BACKGROUND, SEVERAL BEERS ON STOOL WITH LIGHT SHINING ON THEM, A HANDWRITTEN SIGN IS VISIBLY MANUALLY LOWERED ON 2 LINES   
VO: You can treat it like art, but it’s still better just to drink.
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