157: Homework ~ chOOnyOung17
Note - This is the 50,000 word fanfic I was supposed to post on the fifth. Still working on catching up, it may have to wait until tomorrow though.
Title: Homework
Name: Kuchiki Rukia, Kurosaki Ichigo, Kuchiki Byakuya
Suethor: chOOnyOung17
Rating: Toshiro
Pairings: Ichigo/Rukia
Stats: 97,828 words, 12 chapters and 362 reviews. That means the average for each chapter is about 8000 words and 30 reviews.
Appearance: Like the canon characters? I am not even sure on this one.
Background: From chapter two... “Rukia married Ichigo when she was 10 years old. Their first kiss happened during their traditional wedding in Seireitei (Rukia's hometown). But even if they are married and live in the same house for 5 years, they kiss seldom. But thsat 'seldom' occasion is so…hmm (see Rukia's reaction). They are also sleeping in different bedrooms...and will only sleep together as a couple when Rukia becames 18 years old.” Also, “I'm Kuchiki Rukia, 15 years old, a high school student...and married. Yeah, my life sucks and so is my husband. I hate him not because he's a vampire but because he always gives me...a lot of...HOMEWORK.”
Sue Qualifications: Lets see... if I were to slap different names on this, I would have... oh, original fiction.
Annoying Attributes: The summary says “AU & OOC”. Despite the fact that this has some of the same creepy vibes Twilight does and the plot has some holes in it, I honestly think this author has MUCH stronger prose then Meyer does. Still, child grooming is down right creepy.
Sample:
The heavy rain pounds harshly and rapidly on her skin. The droplets almost digging on the now muddy soil where her dainty feet are planted. Her heart seems to beat with the rhythm of the rain...loud, erratic and almost painful as she stares shock at the scene before them.
"Step back." the tall dark haired man says, lifting a protective arm in front of her, hiding her in his back. With her eyes still wide and her body trembling either because of the cold rain or because of fear she's not sure, she just nods and tightens her hold around the baby in her arms. "Who are you?" her husband asks the man standing a few feet away from them. His eyes glowing blood red amidst the blinding darkness around of the forest. And as a roar of thunder and lightning fall upon them, Hisana can't help but shiver at the sight of an incredibly large wolf lying dead beneath the man's feet.
"I'm asking who are you, boy?" Byakuya asks again as the man didn't reply.
"Why is it really necessary to know the name of the one who saved you? And don't call me boy cause I'm way much older than you." the guy who claims to be their savior jumps off from the wild beast's dead body and slowly walks towards them.
"Don't come any closer." Byakuya says in a cold yet very threatening tone. A few minutes earlier they were about to be eaten by a wild beast which appear to be a wolf but this guy suddenly appeared from nowhere and took down the incredibly horrifying and much stronger wolf. But even if the said man saves them, Byakuya still can put his trust on the strange boy...let alone let his guard down and risk his wife and daughter's life. "I said don't come any closer!"
"Che. You have the habit of repeating yourself, don't you?"
"Because you're not listening the first time." Byakuya retorts. "Now, I know you saved our life and I'm thankful for that. But will you please leave us?"
"Hm...not until I have a reasonable payment for saving your life." the stranger says.
Byakuya felt a slight relief but his eyes remains narrowed at the man. He slips a hand inside his coat's pocket and throws a small sack towards the man. "There. It should be enough payment. Now go and leave."
Pulling one hand out of his pocket, the young man crouches down and picks the string attached to the sack, lifting it up from the muddy ground. "What is this?"
"Money, what else." Byakuya answers haughtily and then...
His eyes narrow in annoyance as the young man starts laughing hysterically. He is laughing so hard that it's more irritating than the consistent raindrops digging in his skin.
"What so funny? Isn't it enough..? Here, take another o-"
"Didn't you hear what I said?" the young man cuts him off. His laughter dies instantly and is replace by a serious tone. "I said I need a 'reasonable' payment. I'm not talking about this shit." he tosses the bag back at the dark haired man and look past him. "Is that your wife?" he asks and Byakuya glares daggers at him.
"Don't you dare lay a finger on my wife and my daughter or I'll kill you."
The young man smirks, "Haven't you heard of the saying, an eye for an eye...a tooth for a tooth?" Byakuya's eyes narrow and he pulls his wife further behind him. "It means when you take someone's life you have to pay for it with your own life. But in our case... I...saved you and thus giving you another chance at life so that means..." his eyes start to glow blood red again as he says, "I'm taking someone's life as a reward."
A loud thunder erupts with a shocking lightning ripping the dark sky and making Hisana's body to jump in fear and horror. She felt a woosh of air in front her so she instinctively tightens her hold on her baby's body but then...
"Byakuya! Our baby!" Hisana shrieks in horror and Byakuya's stoic face finally turns horrified as he sees his little daughter in the hands of the dangerous stranger. How did he do that, the couple doesn't have any idea. They knew that the guy is far from being a normal human since he's able to kill a beast with his bare hands but how did he…
"Give my daughter back, you insolent-"
"Ah ah ah! Don't say bad words. The baby can hear you, right little one?" the young man says, cooing a crying baby in his arms. "Ssh...Don't cry. I won't hurt you, don't cry." he holds the baby in both sides and lifts her to level with his eyes. But as he is about to cooed her, the baby suddenly stops crying and opens her eyes...revealing the most beautiful deep purple jewel that he had ever seen in his life. He felt his heart beats frantically, his body shivering, a bubbling stirring in his cells. His eyes glow and he suddenly felt animalistic...white sharp fangs start growing so suddenly and he starts to lose his mind.
Could it be... Is she really... Did he finally...
A low growling comes out from his throat as he inches the baby girl closer to his face. It's eyes staring innocently into his glowing ones and it makes him become wilder as her fresh scent soothes deep inside every nerve of his body and making him more animalistic.
Her blood...it's so fresh and hot. The smell is so intoxicating and driving him mad. He can't control himself anymore. He opens his mouth, revealing those sharp fangs and is about to attack the baby's young flesh but then...
He looks down and sees a silver steel being thrusts upon his abdomen.
"Let go of my daughter." The father of the incredible child says darkly, planting his sword deeper in to the man's flesh. But the cut didn't affect the stranger even a bit. He just let out an animalistic growl and pushes Byakuya away, sending the man a good two meters away before his body hits a tree.
"Byakuya!" Hisana rushes to her husband.
The stranger then pulls the sword out of his body effortlessly and tosses it away. He then lifts the baby up in arms length. The full moon emerges through the thick clouds and casts its dim ligh…forming the sillohuette of the man with a baby in his hands.