Firefly FF: None so Blind - Parts 7-10 (Mal/Simon, R, complete!)

[black_eyedgirl]

The sex happens! Eventually. And not terribly explicitly. After a lot of fluff and angst. But still, sex! My first even vaguely porn bit

Comments

[darksybarite]

"Doc clearly had a dirty mind. Good to know."

This was possibly one of my favorite lines in the entire series... very nonchalant, no dwelling on it, no overtly raunchy accompanying thoughts... and yet very telling. And he just moves on :>

And with the watching, and note-taking... soooo good. I was squirming!

This was FANTASTIC, and I owe you many many white cranes for putting this up there so fast!

Keep up the great work!

[black_eyedgirl]

Aww thank you! At least, provided that squirming and white cranes are good...

Glad you liked that line, cause I wasn't sure whether it made sense or not that Simon would think that and Mal would notice, and then I thought maybe *I* just had a dirty mind.... it was a whole thing. I normally live in fluffville so sexual references are all new to me!

[nova_bright]

Whee! Oh, I love how this concluded! It was sweet without being sickly-sweet, angsty but not over the top...this is a very shiny, well balanced, well written M/S fic. I enjoyed very much, look foreward to readind more of your fic in the future. =^^=

[black_eyedgirl]

"sweet without being sickly-sweet, angsty but not over the top"

Yay! Exactly what I was hoping for. Thanks!

[nikita79x]

Aw, nice ending!

[tartsweetheart]

I really liked this.

I also found myself re-checking my flist a bit too often today, looking for this. That bodes well.

[black_eyedgirl]

"I also found myself re-checking my flist a bit too often today, looking for this. That bodes well"

That's lovely to hear, thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.

[lyrstzha]

I've enjoyed all the parts of this fic, but I especially liked these last few. There were some nice, satisfying character moments, and also a good bit of well-drawn detail.